Utility: The ethical system in which good and moral action is proportionate to the happiness of all affected. This is a story of that belief, science, magic, and a single man turned into so much more than human. How will Eques and Harmony react?
Unfortunately I have lost interest in continuing The Memoir. I will publish the last chapter with only the illustrations I did but none of the writing as I did not finish it. The commission for the cover art was never finished. I did not lose any money however as I was going to pay for it after it was produced. From this experience I realize I biy off more than I can chew for this story. But it
Starting up edits on The Memoir. Chapter one is mostly edited but may still be under construction and revision. The commission for the cover art is taking forever and work on chapter four is still on a stand still but I have ideas on what I want and illustrations for the chapter are done. Peace.
According to the review the story needs A LOT of work. So as I update the story I'll edit the past chapters as well. Also note the illustrations are done for chap 4. But yeah... The review had very strong opinions and criticisms of the story. But nonetheless points in the review made sense but no tact was practiced when presenting them. So I'll keep the review in a doc for myself and I removed it
So finals are over and real progress and research on chapter 4 of The Memoir can actually begin. This next chap will include the structure and government of the state, important species to the Tundra, and illustrations. I also have a commission for the cover art for The Memoir in the works to. So look out for that. Otherwise, not much else to say other than during breaks I work 40 hour weeks at a
Note: I'll be holding off from the daily updates as I need to collect more thoughts on building this world of The Memoir. I know what I want but the words for it aren't there as I haven't done much research into raising a civilization. I could wing it but it would show in the chapter as the main character would proly end up doing something stupid or ignorant.