Been awhile · 1:59am Mar 26th, 2017
It's been a little while since I've been on. Hope everyone's been well.
I have been working on chapter nine off and on. It's not perfect but it's not a total train wreck either (at least I don't think so. I could be wrong. Lol)
I seem to have a problem though. I'm able to write Scootaloo's, Cloud's, and Dash's story, but not Corona's. I have no idea what to do with him. The end goal was for him to run the Rainbow side of the factory giving Dash time to spend with her friends (kinda). Sounds good, right? Well, every time I try to write his part in the factory past what I have in this chapter (which isn't much) I come up blank. I may have to put this story on hiatus after this chapter. Sorry.
One option is to continue with the girls story and not write his until the end or not at all?
I was entertaining the thought of having someone else write Corona's storyline, but I don't know if that's an attainable option.
I don't know. Any ideas would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks,
Jubilee Glider
Hey pal! Hope you've been well. I've been doing alright.
Hey. I'm doing alright. Life's been pretty busy.
I write when the mood strikes. Lately it's been two other stories that have kept my attention which leaves this one suffering.
It doesn't help that my motivation for this story has waned. I would like to finish this, but I don't want to force an ending. Nobody, including me, would like or appreciate that.
I realize this is a bit late, so you might have already figured out some kind of solution, but I felt like saying it anyways:
My recommendation would be to just not write Corona's story until the end, or just make it a separate story that would take place at the same time as RD's, Scoots', and Clouds' side of things.
This isn't just out of my personal desire to see the story continued, nor my love of RD and Scoots (they are my picks for best member of the mane 6 and best CMC, and they're my third and fourth favorite ponies), but because I personally consider that section to be the more interesting of the two.
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That may be a temporary solution and one that I will probably follow, but I still have to have the desire to write, and right now I just don't. It's not just this story either.
You should have a pm from from me that was written before I read this. Again, let me know what you think of it so far in a pm. The link is set for read only.