Jan
15th
2017
sorry for the delay · 2:52am Jan 15th, 2017
Sorry for the delay of the new chapter for 'The Phoenix Princess.
i'm stuck on how the interactions changes are going to go, cause I want to get them all done in one go.
applejack may be the easiest since I already started hers, but the others will be a little tricky. the interactions for Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy, I already know how they will go, but the ones for pinkie and rarity are giving me some problems.
if any of you have any suggestions or comments on how the reactions can go, then leave a comment below on what you would like to see and I'll try to implement them.
I imagine Pinkie either already knowing or not caring. Rarity, however, would either faint or be too 'in the zone' to notice.
In case you can't tell, I can't write fancy white pony for s@$!
4383455 don't worry. S@!* won't be part of the chapter.
I have an idea on how the interaction with applejack is gonna go, but initializing is taking a bit cause I gotta incorporate another part of the Legend of the filly and the phoenix.
I may go back and re-edit the first two chapters to better flesh out the details and vagueness that it needs, plus add a reason for why they are acting the way they are, but until I'm ready to do that I'm gonna keep going.
one major change though is the tests when they are heading for the elements of harmony.
each test is going to end with one of the characters injured, be it one of the mane six or the characters they encounter, and twilight having a spell that she can cast that can heal the damage to a certain extent.
the two most prevalent injuries involve applejack's test (Applejack) and Fluttershy's test (the injury is for the manticore). but the other encounters and their injuries are still up in the air.
think you can come up with something for that?
the first two tests are the same though just with an injury added. both injuries are in the major to severe range.