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Inspector Brown


I am here to sharpen my writing skills. My objective with each of my stories is to create a narrative that dovetails with the show as seamlessly as possible.

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  • 391 weeks
    Working on Sequel to Spot That Changeling and something else.

    So, after poring over the responses you guys gave me, I did some serious thinking about the nature of board game-based fanfiction. At first, I was considering leaving Spot That Changeling alone and moving on to a new project, about a different board game. But when I completed the first chapter of my new project, I could help but realize it was extremely difficult to follow. Not because I wrote

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  • 393 weeks
    Should I write a sequel to Spot That Changeling?

    I'll be honest, I never imagined Spot That Changeling would reach the audience that it has. I hardly put any effort into that story at all, I just started typing, and let the story sort of flow naturally to wherever it seemed to want to go. And it clearly struck a chord with quite a few people. Don't get me wrong, I'm honored and flabbergasted that you guys enjoy my overactive imagination as

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Should I write a sequel to Spot That Changeling? · 2:51pm Nov 2nd, 2016

I'll be honest, I never imagined Spot That Changeling would reach the audience that it has. I hardly put any effort into that story at all, I just started typing, and let the story sort of flow naturally to wherever it seemed to want to go. And it clearly struck a chord with quite a few people. Don't get me wrong, I'm honored and flabbergasted that you guys enjoy my overactive imagination as much as I do. But now that I know you are out there, I kind of feel pressured to give you more of what you like. And I don't know if I can do that. I guess what I'm really trying to figure out is this: was Spot That Changeling lightning in a bottle? Was it the perfect combination of the right idea, the right author, and the right time, and it won't ever happen again? Or could I improve on what came before, and make a new story that captures the spirit of the original while improving on its flaws?

Full disclosure: I've already started writing the sequel, but I don't want to publish it until I get some feedback from the people who read and liked the original. So tell me, should I make a sequel to Spot That Changeling?

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Evo
Evo #1 · Nov 2nd, 2016 · · ·

Go for it!
I found 'Spot That Changeling' to be a fun and enjoyable read.
So I would give the sequel a chance.

I would love to read a sequel to Spot that Changeling! I'd definitely read!

I mean, while I liked the concept, I don't know where one would expand on it.

Unless I had some juicy beetsdeets, I can't really make a desicion.

I'd enjoy reading a sequel and if you'd like a pre reader I'd be more than up for the task, I'm rather curious as to how you'd expand it.

On the one hand, the story feels complete as-is. While a sequel would be fun, it's not currently lacking for one.

On the other, I do think it's feasible to make a sequel that's just as good: the concept of ponies playing party mindgames could be extended in all sorts of directions for more fun. So if you do make a sequel, it definitely could work. If you make it, I'll definitely read it.

I think it's really fun to read about the main 6 playing different games, so maybe you could have them do a different game in the sequel, like monopony or risk :pinkiesmile:

I would read that; I liked how well you knew the characters and how believable their interactions were. The story does feel closed and I don't think a sequel is needed, but if you already have an idea and it's partially written, then you clearly found somewhere to go with it. I think you could put it out there, for sure.

Can the story be improved on? No idea.

Am I eager to see whatever you make following this story? Absolutely.

It's not so much I want to see the same idea again (though that would certainly be entertaining) as I want to see more of this world.

I'd read it. But be aware that sequels almost never get as much attention as the original story did.

Ooooooh hell yes.

I think the key decision point is do you actually have a solid idea for a sequel that you want to post?

If the answer is yes then go for it.

If the answer is no then don't.

Trying to force a story out of some sense of obligation to "the fans," always ends badly.

4282171 A good part of the reason being, that fimfiction doesn't notify readers of sequels anymore... :fluttershysad:

I guess the bookshelf-system introduced back in '14 was incompatible with sequel-notifications somehow. :unsuresweetie:

So many authors never think to post a blog entry tagged with the old story. As a reader, it's quite irritating to miss out on a sequel, and the author is disappointed for not receiving as much feedback. :pinkiesad2:

Ah well.

As for a sequel - yeah, sure! :pinkiesmile:

What's the general outline?

Impersonating ponies other than the mane 6? Playing the impersonation game with new rules, or in a different environment? Thorax playing pranks with Rainbow Dash? Or dealing with the season 6 aftermath?

i would love more of that story, only if you want to make it though.

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The idea was to get a new cast of players to play the same game. I was even going to include Thorax as an honest player, and use an OC as the infiltrator instead. But I don't think a sequel is going to be worth the effort if it's just more of the same thing again.

Maybe I should follow cheesegal's advice instead, and set up a new game for the ponies to play?

I would read it, as long as there are different ponies and/or the rules were expanded. Of course, I loved it. Being able to try and guess along with Twilight was fun. So, if you have a new idea, then go for it! Just make sure it is actually a good idea. I would read a "spot that Changeling" sequel if it was the same idea, just expanded. I feel like any other game would be hard to do. Seeing as it's usually boring to watch someone play a game. I think it would be better to do the same kind of thing. However, if you have an idea for something somewhat different, go for it! I will most definitely read it! And will try and help as well! :derpytongue2: :raritystarry:

A sequel sounds fun, but maybe add something new to spice it up a little. Like a few new players, or maybe have Discord sneak in and transform into somepony else at the same time to trick everypony.

>>Inspector Brown
That would be a good idea and I would certainly read it however you need to remember that not everyone likes similar things so try and branch out with this concept
However as stated above I would love to see how you would expand upon this world
I look for the reading the sequel regardless

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