Aug
24th
2016
Ch 9 of Bitter Tears rewritten! · 8:17pm Aug 24th, 2016
Ummmm....hi!
First of all, thanks to all the bronies and pegasisters out there that liked my story and have chosen to follow me.
Your support is very much appreciated!
I also appreciate the feedback and constructive criticism I've recieved. I've been reviewing what I've written so far and I've realized you've made some valid points....Ch 9 was way too short and not nearly dramatic enough.
I've chosen to rewrite that particular chapter. The first half is the same except with a longer and more dramatic ending.
I hope you will read the chapter and I would appreciate your feedback, just like with all the other chapters.
There will be more chapters to come and I hope you will continue reading and liking my work!
Hattafan out.
