Idea I Had · 9:33pm Jun 1st, 2016
I had an idea for a story, but I'm not sure if I should go through with it. Considering it, but not sure. I'll leave it below a break, and you can give me your opinion.
Sunset’s friends all debate who should date her. Eventually, they decide that they should let Sunset decide herself. Through various means, each attempts to win her over. As these attempts grow more and more extreme, Sunset finally decides that she’s had enough, and declares the six to be her harem. If they don’t like, they can just deal with only being her friends. She failed to consider that they might actually be okay with that.
And now, Sunset Shimmer has a Harem.
But really, is that such a bad thing?
Pretty sure I’m not the first to do this. I haven’t seen it, but I’m sure it’s been done. Also, if you take this any more seriously than you would any harem anime, that’s your problem.
Prologue: Decision
“Alright, I’ll see you all tomorrow!” Sunset called as she jogged off away from the front of the school, waving over her shoulder as she went.
“Oh, it’s such a shame we can’t spend just a couple of more hours with her…” Rarity said with a sigh as she and the rest of the Rainbooms plus one Twilight Sparkle waved back.
“Yeah, she is kind of fun to be around,” Twilight agreed quietly, pushing her glasses back up her nose.
“That is so not what she means,” Pinkie cut in with a sly smirk, plopping down on the school steps.
“It’s not?” Twilight asked, her face flushing a bit at the way Pinkie was eyeing Sunset.
“Well, I do enjoy her company…we all do, but…”
“Here’s the thing, Twi,” Applejack cut in, slinging an arm over Twilight’s shoulders. “Sunset’s… pretty darn easy on the eyes.”
“Easy on the eyes?!” Rainbow replied, punching Applejack’s shoulder. “She’s straight up smokin hot!”
“Dat booty…” Fluttershy whispered, covering her mouth with her fists.
“Oh my stars!” Twilight squeaked as she duck away from Applejack and took a few steps away. “You all just… objectify her like that?” she asked, glaring at them. “She’s your friend! How could you?”
“It’s not objectification, dear,” Rarity explained softly, taking a step towards her. “We all do care deeply for Sunset… But we also...” she paused for a moment, putting her chin between her thumb and forefinger. “…greatly admire her... mmhmm assets.” A somewhat chilling smile came over her face as she closed her eyes.
“That’s…”
“Are you saying you don’t think Sunset’s attractive?” Fluttershy asked, tilting her head to the left.
“Well, I mean… That’s not…”
“Sugarcube, you’re among friends here.”
“B-but…”
“C’mon, Twilight! Just admit it!”
“I-I… Yes!” Twilight shouted, crossing her arms over her stomach. She shut her eyes tight and turned her face down. “I think Sunset’s attractive! Are you happy now?”
Rarity stepped forward and put a hand on Twilight’s shoulder. “The question is, Darling, are you happy?”
Twilight slowly opened her eyes and looked up at Rarity through her bangs. “W-what?”
“It feels better now, doesn’t it?” Rarity asked, smiling warmly at Twilight. “It’s nice to put it out in the open, isn’t it?”
“Well, yeah… but…”
“But?”
“It still feels wrong…” Twilight whispered. “A relationship is supposed to be about trust and love… but all I can think about is her body…”
“You’re so silly, Twilight!” Pinkie shouted from behind her, causing her to jump and stumble forward into Rarity, who was very quick to catch her in a gentle embrace. “None of us are talking about a relationship. We just want in her pants.”
“Pinkie, could you try to be a bit more subtle about it?” Applejack scolded, causing Pinkie to recoil a bit, before turning to Twilight. “She’s right, though.”
“Pinkie does raise an interesting question, though…” Rarity said calmly as she released Twilight with an apologetic smile. “Clearly, none of us are interested in anyone but Sunset, but have any of us actually made a move?”
A collective negative swept across the group.
“I wouldn’t do that to you girls; I love you all too much to betray you like that.…” Fluttershy said quietly from where she sat on the steps, clutching the hem of her skirt.
“Well, before we get into a debate about who deserves to be with her,” Rainbow said calmly, holding out her hands, “It’s totally me.”
“I call bullshit!” Pinkie shouted, pointing a finger at Rainbow. “It should totally be me! I can make her happier than anyone else!”
Applejack gave a smirk and leaned in close to Pinkie. “Cheese Sandwich would beg to differ,” she said playfully.
Pinkie whirled on her, glaring and thrusting a finger in her face. “Don’t even joke about that,” she growled.
“Well, shouldn’t we let her decide?” All eyes turned to Twilight, who immediately shrunk away from the looks. “If one of us is going to be with her, shouldn’t it be the one she’s most happy with?”
“Twilight is right!” Rarity shouted, clapping her hands together. “We should let Sunset decide!”
“I reckon that’s a good point.”
“I um… I agree. Sunset should have a choice in the matter.”
“So, we’re doing this?” Pinkie asked, plopping down beside Fluttershy. She was met with affirmatives all around.
“But!” Rainbow interjected, raising a finger in front of her. “If we’re gonna do this… I don’t wanna lose your friendships. Let’s make a promise, here and now.” She held her hand out flat, palm facing down. “I want us to promise that we won’t let this come between us as friends.”
Five hands were promptly laid on hers, and a collective nod was given.
“Then it’s settled!” Applejack said, pulling her hand back.
Rarity smiled warmly at them. “May the best woman win.”
Again, not sure if I'll actually do this, but it's a possibility, and it'll be a back burner project. hope to get feedback.
With Love,
Gypsy
This seems... interesting enough that I want to see more. Hopefully you do go with this, because it has the potential to be hilarious.
Do it.
But Sunset needs a dick.
3991491 no dicks, mate. Sorry. I'm a yuri shipper, through and through.
3997278 >:C
3997702 Now, now. None of that. I have my reasons for the things I do. Having anymore than the rest of the H7 as Sunset Sarsaparilla's harem is going to be too much to write.
3998155 >:C
3998155 I'm no longer interested.
3998214 Don't be so salty. Besides, what men could I include, aside from Flash? Whom I should mention I despise with a passion. Fuckin waifu stealer.
3998232 Trixie said nothing about men.
3998429
I'm not degrading this into terrible and unreasonable futa porn. I may add a strap on in a later chapter, but nothing more.
3998451 ... wow, Trixie's offended.
3998451 it's already plotted to be terrible and unreasonable lesbian shitfic porn. I doubt Dickset shimmer will degrade its "quality" any further.
3998465 Let me rephrase: I've written humanized futa clop before. It was terrible. I'll probably never do it again. Don't get me wrong, I like futa. Some of my favorite clopfics are futa. But I'm terrible at it.
And who said anything about this being a shitfic? I don't write shitfics. I'm terrible at those too. It's going to be a legitimate romance between the seven of them. It's going to have morals, conflicts, everything. But it's all going to be under the label of a harem.
If you don't like the way I choose to write my stories, and I really hate to say this, you don't have to read them. I would like you to read them, and I would like to entertain you, but neither of us have to do those. I'm sorry if I come across as an asshole, but that's the way it is.
3998494 I wouldn't be entertained. I don't intend to read it. I don't read any of your other work.
This one is a special case of not going to read. I'm going to super not-read this.
3998521 Then why did you follow me? If you have no intention to read my work, then why are you even here?
3998532 Right. Rectified.