The first Rainbow Dash chapter has been updated.

I reworked chapter 3, Rainbow Dash 1. As usual, we're only talking grammar and sentence flow, and it's not necessary to go back and read it again. Hopefully this makes it more appealing to new readers, as I did cringe at some of my early mistakes.

Other than that, I feel like these update posts are a bit boring, but I still want to make them. Here's a cool pic about humanized Fluttershy if you guys want something to debate.

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[Grey Bard]

Reminds me a bit of Steve Irwin (especially the shorts ) "We love our (enter any animal name)!"

[Roranicus]

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Haha, she kinda does.

[Captain_Hairball]

Get you a mare who can do both.

Seriously, oh, I LOVE forest ranger humanshy! So using that if I ever wind up showing her at work in one of my EqG fics.

[Roranicus]

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I'd imagine Fluttershy as one of these people who's completely different at work and in everyday life. Didn't Equestria Girls had her volunteer at an animal shelter? I can't really imagine her working there in a short skirt, lol.