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Chaos Phantasm


An on again-off again Australian FIMfiction author. I like to write stories, be they good or bad. I always have an idea in my head just waiting to be used. I love to write and will continue to do so.

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  • 119 weeks
    How is everyone?

    Hello. :twilightsmile:

    I wasn't very active last year. Normally I write blogs to let people know that I'm still roaming about on the site, but for some reason last year, I didn't. I'm sorry about that. It's not like I had anything going on either, I was just lazy, I suppose.

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  • 179 weeks
    Merry Christmas!

    Blessings unto you on this day, December 25th.

    2020 has been such an awful year. It's destroyed lives and families in the wake of a terrible and virile plague. In light of this, I wish people the very best day in 2020, wherever you may be. Please be safe and hearty. Let us make 2021 a better year for all of us.

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  • 196 weeks
    Anniversary Blog (two days late)

    I've been on this site for seven years, time flies very quickly.

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  • 207 weeks
    But you said... (take it with a grain of salt)

    Yeah, I know what I said, but before you hang me, hear me.

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  • 218 weeks
    Deleting another story

    Gonna keep this short because I don't care for this particular story enough and I know well enough that neither do you.

    I will be deleting A Song of Angels from my library at my discretion of course. The artwork as done by Turbopower1000 will still be available on his Deviantart, considering that the artwork is probably plastered over the internet, having them deleted wouldn't matter at all.

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May
15th
2016

A Hearths Warming Tale · 3:02am May 15th, 2016

I know I said I'd do one for the episodes brought out in the last two weeks but internet issues made difficult. So here's my thoughts on A Hearths Warming Tale.

To sum it up, Starlight Glimmer see's Hearths Warming as a childish day, and an excuse to give out presents and candy. Twilight is shocked at this revelation and decides to tell Starlight her favorite Hearths Warming Story. What follows and A Christmas carol like story-line that takes a really dark turn toward the end before the stories Ebenezer Scrooge finally comes around.

So yeah, it was a good episode, and I'm finding it difficult to point out anything wrong with it, although I'm sure everyone else can. I love how AJ was Hearths Warming Past, Pinkie is literally Hearths Warming Present, and Luna is Hearths Warming Yet-to-Come, although I was bothered that they didn't portray that variation of Luna faithfully to the Dickens character (then again the character was terrifying in the original story.) This episode felt a lot like a Megan McCarthy and M.A. Larson episode (even though Larson isn't apart of the production anymore, at least I think he isn't.)

The small break in the story so that Spike could get more coco was an obvious 'commercial break' moment, and felt wholly unnecessary, to me at least. Also, No Jacob Marley Pony, I know Jim Miller said on Twitter there was no time to add him into this Episode, universe wise, I think Twilight skipped a part.

This episode is basically just a Ponified version of A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens, the stories been done before and typically the target of the reform comes around quickly. we don't quite see Starlight come around to it gradually, it's instantaneous and not gradual. the character she represent in Twilights story does, however. Whether or not we're supposed to be seeing Starlight come around through that character is lost on me...

Oh, so I did find something wrong with it after all. But even so, it's the typical MLP plot convenience.

It was a good episode regardless, I enjoyed it a lot. 8/10. :twilightsmile:

P.S: I love Starlights first song, especially the end where she sings super soft, I am a massive sucker for songs that end like that, it's so nom!

Comments ( 2 )

I loved both of starlight's songs

3945137 Starlights first song is my absolute fave. I actually edited that I liked it into the blog after your comment. :pinkiehappy:

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