Aug
28th
2012
Next project · 3:05am Aug 28th, 2012
So for those who loved Inner Demons, I have another story planned. This one is a crossover with Ultraman, and it uses a lot of the same kind of story telling and similar themes, but features giant monsters and "actors fighting in rubber suits" (I am actually in love with Ultraman, so yeah). For those who see this and have read Inner Demons so far, why don't you all tell me what you think?
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Damn it, I did not even finish the "Demons" yet...
... not like I would ever object to having another great story to read, though.
****SPOILERS for ppl who HAVEN'T read the story****
The story started out a little slow. But the more I read, the more enthralled I became. Once I made it to chapter 21, I had to go find the rest of the fic on fanfiction.net because I just couldn't wait for you to upload the rest here.
I loved how things got extremely desperate towards the end. Rarity "dying" was a great twist. I am a fan of Rarity acting like a big girl and not the shallow...whatever you call it from the show... So it was shocking to see her gone, I couldn't stop reading then since I had to see if she would come back to life somehow.
The happy ending made it for me, I love seeing a story that can get you to care about the characters, then tear those characters to shreds in front of you leaving you with no idea how/if things will bounce back. That makes a good ending perfect, when you don't know it is coming, but you are hoping for it.
I would have liked to see how Twilight coped with life after coming back to Ponyville, as well as spending some more time with the 'evolved' elements. I like seeing people take the magical power that is only hinted at in the show, and develop it into something amazing.
Basically, almost everything about this fic is good. The few grammatical errors here and there and the slow start were insignificant.
I liked Inner Demons for the Evil and dark themes, if those are present in the next story, then consider it read, if not, I'll still take a look
Did you really need to kill Trixie like that? It really wasn't necessary...... I almost cried when she died. Sorry but I'm just a big Trixie fan.
I am resisting the idea of hunting down those remaining chapters of Inner Demons: too much at one sitting will probably scare the bejesus out of me, and I don't take that well. It is a remarkable story, and I'm glad I've gotten to see it, but I'm also glad you're doling it out a little at a time.
Inner demons is an whole buncha win so if your going to make a new story (that involves people in rubber suits (by god that scares me more than a Evil Derpy)) since you made Inner Demons and made it as entertaining as you did ill give you full trust with (like you need it) I GIVE MY WHOLE SUPPORT! YEAH! (i feel stupid now
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P.S. dont appligize for killing a character I think most people with enough logic in their heads to read should know or guess why it happens
but still am happy to see you care for your readers to explain and such and such why 
BEST OF LUCK ...now to reserch this "Ultraman" thingy
I want, a sequel to Inner Demons. Like what happened to Twilight after moving back, yadda yadda.
Don't worry, there are more I want to do with that series, but this is a story I've been dying to write.
316668 Funny you should mention that, Trixie is the main character of this story.
316771 How so?
.316630 I won't post The Ultramare until Inner Demons is done. Don't worry.
316776 Well, in the new story, Trixie is the one who becomes the Ultramare.
316781 Your a Trixie fan too?
I love the story and my only real complaints are that some of the action scenes you write feel a bit too bland for my taste (not enough details and at times, it feels rushed). I digress, I have no real intention to risk reading a possible sequel for "Inner Demons" if it ends on a solid note. I don't like the risk of ruining a possible good (or bittersweet) ending with a sequel that I'll have a difficult time overcoming.
316785 Yeah. I'm a fan of the redeemer version. I don't see Trixie as a bad pony.
316814 Just no more Trixie dying ok? I'm still trying to get over her death.
316816 Sorry about that. She won't die in this story.
316841
SPOILER MAN.... warn me and shit :P
Are you going to post the Sequel here as well because the only thing that stops me from reading the rest of Demons and the sequel now is Fan fictions layout
316993 Oh yeah, definitely.
316816 we all do, or so i hope. she's my third favorite pony. just like Pinkamina and Luna more.
316841 i actually fucking cried when she died. you're too good, i love you. and kinda hate you for killing Trixie. but then love you again for being a Trixie lover
okay... PLEASE
finish "10 years" before you do this... Not only is it a little bit insulting to
your active readers to leave us hanging with only 6 years left,
but it's insulting to Apple Bloom,
the best minor character in the show
. I don't mean to be mean, 
but you've had 3 weeks
before I complained about it, so I think that I'm relatively justified in asking "what the hay?"
322609 Do not worry. I will finish 10 Years. I already finished typing the first episode of Ultramare, so I can post that up any time. Let me finish posting Inner Demons here, then I'll get back to 10 Years.
Worry not my little pony, I finish what I start.
While trying to get other things done, I finished the first episode of Ultramare and posted it up as a pilot episode. Give it a read and tell me what you think in the comments. It should pass moderation sometime later on today hopefully.