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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Monday
    Did two things this past weekend...

    First, I ran 10k for the first time in two months after laying off that long to let my ankle bursitis subside, trying to allow the area to generally heal up. It appears that it worked. To my delight, there was no ankle pain after and I hadn’t even lost much stamina thanks to hitting an elliptical machine twice a week for an hour instead of jogging. My upper legs are another matter, though.

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  • 1 week
    C&C chapter 40 entering prereads tonight + teaser

    Much as I didn’t want to, I made the decision to break it up since the full length of the War Council meeting had exceeded 20,000 words and will probably approach 25k for the now-two chapters before all is said and done. The breakpoint itself will be between learning about the general war situation both Aricia and the Griffon Kingdom face, and then discussing what in all the Crows they’re going

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  • 2 weeks
    Midnight Rising/C&C update: April showers may bring May flowers...

    But of more interest is the emergence of 17-year cicadas in my area. Big, ugly, red-eyed insects that are the size of your thumb but basically harmless, as long as you can get past all the shed skins they leave behind on leaves and the everpresent and disconcertly loud background sound they produce as a mating call. Fortunately, the outbreak in my area seems pretty limited. There's a few around,

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  • 3 weeks
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 4 weeks
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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Feb
23rd
2016

Unleash the Magic - Epilogue will post on Thursday... · 9:24pm Feb 23rd, 2016

Been a wild ride, but it has to end... for now. In suitably appropriate manner, of course... :rainbowwild: In celebration of the 300th like, making it easily my most popular story to date, the epilogue goes live on Thursday morning.

With this 3600-word epilogue, I'll be marking the story complete, but be assured that's not the end. There will be bonus material to come, an alternate ending and bonus chapters detailing scenes happening around Midnight and Sunset, and I'll be using the epilogue to rather blatantly set up a sequel. These won't happen right away, however. Have to get back to my more 'serious' clop for a bit...

A preview? Well, twist my arm...


Principal Cinch, predictably, thought first of her school’s reputation… and her own. “Principal Celestia! On behalf of Crystal Prep, I demand that you forfeit the Friendship Games! Clearly, CHS has had an unfair advantage for quite some time! And it's certainly obvious that your students have been using magic for their own benefit!”

Principal Celestia looked at me and for the first time ever, she favored me with a smile, going over to stand behind me and put her hands on my shoulders. “I'd like to think that saving the world benefits us all. And our own Sunset here certainly did that and more...” she trailed off with an odd note in her voice.

Before I could wonder what she meant by and more, Sugarcoat spoke up. “At least they didn't manipulate Twilight into releasing all the stolen magic and turning into a power-crazed magical creature that tried to rip the world apart just to win a game,” she said as she dusted herself off and replaced her glasses, suddenly looking down at herself and patting her midsection as if to feel for something she kept thinking had been there.

“Wow! That's a lot to take in when you say it all at once!” Pinkie Pie scratched her head like she, too, was trying to remember something elusive… or was I just imagining it all?

“Oh, she can take a lot,” Indigo Zap smirked, then her brow furrowed like she wasn’t immediately certain where the thought came from, Sugarcoat suddenly blushing.

“Saved the world? That's ridiculous!” Cinch retorted, wondering why her watch suddenly seemed to be a half-hour slow.

“Nope, that's pretty much what happened,” Spike spoke up from Twilight’s arms, and nobody gave him a second look after all they’d already seen. It was only then I realized—he hadn’t lost his magic if he was still talking!

Uh-oh. My magical reversal and memory alteration spells had missed him because he’d been encased in Midnight’s protective bubble, and that also meant…

He looked at me and gave me a wink.

Comments ( 4 )

Spike the dog remembers everything?

Awesome!

“Nope, that's pretty much what happened,” Spike spoke up from Twilight’s arms, and nobody gave him a second look after all they’d already seen. It was only then I realized—he hadn’t lost his magic if he was still talking!
Uh-oh. My magical reversal and memory alteration spells had missed him because he’d been encased in Midnight’s protective bubble, and that also meant…
He looked at me and gave me a wink.

3773371 ... I believe the expression goes, "That sly dog."

Looking forward to that bonerbonus material.

3773371
I'm surprised the poor dog isn't traumatized.

Hype people, get some

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