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PortalJumper


Aspiring author practicing on the world of technicolor horses

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  • 165 weeks
    Alicornae Ch. 58 Uploaded!

    And here it is, the end of all things. Sorry for how long this took to write gang, but between the tumultuous opening to the year, a fear of this story's ending falling flat, and the fact that COVID just got done running through my family (everyone's fine, don't worry), it's been a busy few months.

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  • 177 weeks
    Alicornae Ch. 57 Uploaded!

    Happy Hearth's Warming! As my gift to you, have 7500 words of Alicornae! Now if you'll excuse, me I'm gonna go eat Chinese food with my family! Don't forget to comment and like if you enjoyed it!

    Finale 2/3

    3 comments · 217 views
  • 179 weeks
    Alicornae Ch. 56 Posted!

    Alright boyos, this is a long one and there's a lot of revelations to come, so I hope you understand why this took 15 days to write. Hopefully the next chapter wknd take as long, but it's going to be as long, if not longer than this one, so thanks again for the patience.

    As always, comments are appreciated, and don't forget to like if you enjoyed it!

    Finale: Part 1/3

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  • 180 weeks
    Alicornae Ch. 55 Posted!

    And so the end has finally begun. The next chapter and probably the one after that are gonna be my patented "double-length climax chapters", so I thank you in advance for your patience while I work on them. Don't forget to comment and like if you enjoyed, and I'll see ya for the next one!

    1 comments · 191 views
  • 181 weeks
    Alicornae Ch. 54 Uploaded!

    It all starts to fall into place in this chapter, so come get it while it's hot! Also, enjoy the extra 1000 or so words since I was getting WAY too into this chapter and let my muse run away with me! Don't forget to comment and like, and enjoy!

    3 comments · 205 views
Feb
7th
2016

TCoaL Review/ Question · 5:39am Feb 7th, 2016

So, a few months ago I submitted The Chance of a Lifetime to the Pleasent Commentators and Review group for review, and it just came back with a rating of "Enjoyable". So yay for that!

http://www.fimfiction.net/group/201936/the-pleasant-commentator-and-review-group/thread/235833/review-the-chance-of-a-lifetime-by-portaljumper-enjoyable

Here's the link if you want to read it, and I'll be taking critiques to heart, but I wanted to ask a question; should I make my chapters longer? I've been working on perspective and pacing a lot with this fic, but I feel I'm getting good enough at it that I can have multiple scenes in the same chapter and not slip into bad writing. Comment below with your answer, and once again thanks for all the support and love! :raritywink:

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