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Mocha Star


I'm here to write my way into your hearts and infect your minds.

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    Interviews with inpatients at Broadhoof mental asylum seemed like another task. With a few words from a patient, his entire life is brought into question.
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  • 159 weeks
    Past two weeks

    They've been great, but I've been so bleh.
    Like, depressed and overworked.
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Jan
8th
2016

Madness almost done · 4:36am Jan 8th, 2016

To the readers of my story Madness, formerly Madnessess, I'm pushing to finish it by the end of the week. I make no promises except that this will not be rushed; it will be a great ending, and I have no idea how it'll end.

I have four options but it's all about how the next couple chapters pan out.

However I have one question.

How would any reader feel about a real shocking twist to end the tale?

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Comments ( 5 )

Is it sad when I first came across this story, I couldn't help but think of a song by Battle Beast?

3671842
Are you at least reading it... Or listening to the song regularly?

3671952

You might like the end then.

I personally don't count the twist as a twist of I get told about a probable twist.
So, I personally would take even more time than usual reading the chapter to find the twist.
Unless the twist is so big it was something that I absolutely didn't expect at all, like...
Death Star is Darth Vader! Ooohhhh....
Sorry, I cant stop thinking about Star Wars :twilightsheepish:

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