Final thoughts with , Darkone 78: reunited (a sequel to negotiations) · 2:02am Jan 6th, 2016
The plot: the plot was heart jerking but could of used some work such as a flash back explaining how the war between humans and ponies happened leading to Fluttershy's betrayal.
The story: Is well told but again a flash back would be nice.
The final verdict: I over all enjoyed this story 20/31.