Yo this is darkone 78 I am calling all fans of Blazblue a 2D fighting game created by arcsystem works. I want to cross over mlp and Blazblue first the setting: A. The world of Blazblue B. Equestria. Then the main character A. Noel Vermillion B. Rainbowdash C. Ranga the blood edge D. Spike the Dragon. E. Tsubaki Yayoi F. Fluttershy
The plot: the plot was heart jerking but could of used some work such as a flash back explaining how the war between humans and ponies happened leading to Fluttershy's betrayal. The story: Is well told but again a flash back would be nice. The final verdict: I over all enjoyed this story 20/31.
The fan fiction negotiations was interesting. the story was filled with great dialogue and dark. The characters conversed well with each other but Twilight would have never let humans kill Celestia but hey fan fiction anything goes. Now the plot was awesome, interm the plot had no plot holes. The verdict when you add my personal enjoyment 7/10.