Don't Write on a Whim, Kids · 4:59am Jan 5th, 2016
Well...
As a few of you may have noticed, I published a new fic. It's called 'In Which Ponies Go Sailing', and it was an experiment; a light-hearted, semi-comment-driven adventure...
...It also kinda sucks.
I know when something's horrible, and... It's pretty bad. The pacing is odd and disjointed, the characters don't mesh at all, and it throws random twists at you left and right...
So I'm not gonna continue it until I take a step back, find a way to make it not a piece of crap, and re-write the thing.
Sorry for getting all your hopes up.
Honestly, just stick to Mind Control and Bimbofication, you're better at it.......
I disagree. It started off very well, and I think it has plenty of promise.