Regarding the Rainbow Dash · 6:58am Jan 1st, 2016
Should I continue the story?
I've gotten only 1,000 - 2,000 worth of words in the next chapter. The characters feel stiff, the romance feels forced and there is that unsatisfactory taste when I proofread it. I just can't seem to better the situation because I don't know how.
The first chapter, after all, was only an experiment. It seemed like an interesting idea at the moment.
I'I've already planned out the rest of the chapters. Unfortunately, all the dates seem bland and stale at the moment. Until the lot of you can shower me with the best/crazy ideas, I'm stuck.
I can pre read if you want
Yes, I believe you should. I liked where it was going.
Shower you with crazy? Sounds dangerous.