You all will hate me for this. · 2:40am Oct 15th, 2011
With the triumphant return of Hoennshy and a new image to christen its continued voyage, I'm dropping anchor and sailing it back into port for repairs. In basic terms, I'm rewriting the first chapter and letting my new and improved pre-reading team help spruce up the first eight chapters into the quality chapters nine, ten, and eleven had.
The first chapter was dull. Very dull. My goal is to write an opening chapter that will capture people's spirits to continue reading this monstrous story. I recommend, nay, encourage anyone who has read the whole story thus far to read the new edited chapters when they are added. There are several changes and included story threads that will make things make little sense if you continue to chapter twelve without the new eight chapters under your proverbial belt. They aren't huge changes, but some foreshadowing elements might sneak their way in.
If you're wondering if this will take long, I'm already half way done with the rewrite of chapter one, and it's already longer than the inaugural chapter. I'll be adding a change log if you just want to read that instead of the whole thing again. I won't take that long to read those chapters again though, it's only a little longer than a Fallout: Equestria chapter.
Excuse me as I continue this insane venture in the second half of my school's semester. Writing and drawing, it's all I do now. Oh, and playing Dark Souls. Damn that game is good.
