Reviews for Prelude to Change & Change of Life by Goldfur · 10:52pm Dec 9th, 2015
I know I usually don't post blogs with reviews for me than one story, but these stories connect together. These stories by Goldfur are just two of a few, but these are the two I've read so far. I do recommend them warning, it does mention herding. Not too much, but it's still mentioned. I know some readers aren't a big fan so I feel it respectful. These stories are very well written and the author even added art to certain chapters. It's one of the best changeling stories I've come across on here. If you're into romantic slice of life stories then you must read. Here are my reviews on these two stories.
Prelude to Change
This was a very well done telling from the changeling’s perspective of the royal wedding day. I also loved how you explained the location of the hive. Even though no one's sure for sure if changelings actually form hives, but it seems to fit.
~LATEP
Change of Life
I really enjoyed this story. The plot is very good and I love how you shared art of the characters. You have an adorable style of drawing. The character names were very good. I especially loved Golden Words. I love when I see a pony with a good name that represents writing. I got really happy when you mentioned A Novel Tale, which is another amazing changeling story I’ve read. I also love how one of your main characters had a disability and overcame it. I saw you mentioned herding though you didn’t mention it much, but I know some people aren’t fans of herding, so I would just suggest, so the readers will know ahead of time, maybe put an author’s note in the story description as a warning that herding is mentioned. As writer’s we have to make sure to show respect to our readers. If it wasn’t for them our stories wouldn’t be known. If any of that sounded mean I am so sorry, I wasn’t trying to be mean.
~LATEP
If you want to read these here are the links in order. Prelude to Change and then Change of Life