Need Readers Help!

Okay! So my depression has calmed down significantly and I am ready to start writing again.

Almost.

See, what I want to do is continue Doctor Whooves stuff. So I would like some feedback on The Lynchpin Qunitet. Comments really push forward my writing, and I could really use them.

Don't know Doctor Who? That's fine. I really do my best to explain.

It's on my page, all in a row. I really could use the help. Thank you.

Comments

[SweetCaptain77]

What I'd like to know is the relation between the Doctor, the Mara......and.....whoever it was that had that tattoo.....the name escapes me.

[gamexpert1990]

...Light, can you forgive me?

I told you I would give you my thoughts on your "Lynchpin Quintet," but I never got around to doing so. I'm truly sorry for that...

Is there any way I can make it up to you? (Aside from commenting, I mean. I'm going to try to stop procrastinating and do that anyway.)

[LightOfTriumph]

3540962 No need to apologize! I forgot too.

3540887

What I'd like to know is the relation between the Doctor, the Mara...

Well... If any of you decided to watch Classic Who every so often you'd know....