ELR on ice

So I sent off Everypony Loves Rainbow to EQD, not really expecting much. Imagine my mild surprise, then, when they said that, with a little grammatical revision, it would be worthy of their site!

There is a small issue with this, though. I seem to be incapable of correcting my own grammar, despite having so much experience berating others for their errors.

Boy do I feel like a pillock now.

Anyway, I've attempted to enlist the help of someone much more familiar with the minute workings of the English language than I. Until this story is repaired, consider it on ice. I won't call it a hiatus, because I'll probably keep working on the next chapter, and might even do a oneshot or something in the meantime.

So, to the three of you who may read this, I bid you adieu - for this is not goodbye.