This'll be a while...

Before you can go forward, you must sometimes turn around and go back.

So the next update of Dawn is going to be quite a way off. I've had a pretty scathing review of the piece and after rereading the first chapter I agree with most of the points.

This story is one that I absolutely want to poor my heart and soul into, so I'm getting a second opinion. I'm sorry for the delay, but sometimes that's how it's gotta be.