Just a little something

Threw up some word vomit onto a google docs file. No idea if it'll turn into something more, but I felt like at least getting something down.

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[Da Bunnana King]

It would be funny if the guy had AIDS.

[Krass McWriter]

Hmmm... vampires in tcb I assume?

[darkmatterbutterflies]

Woah. I thought they drained love-like emotion. Blood, uh, seems worse. I'm guessing you've got an explanation for why, though.

Very terrifying, although the villain (this... is the villain... right? ) could end up unnecessarily sexy. I guess there's a reason for that: it's something that it's a mask she's putting on, but I would Beware The Trope. If you have her cooing, draping herself over stuff and making kinky passes at the protagonists, it'll be a turn-off for a lot of the potential audience.

[Windchaser]

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She's a changeling. And the allusion to her being a vampire is from her needing to feed on human blood, since human emotions (especially when they're in a one night stand) aren't substantial enough for her. Ponies, on the other hand, she can feed from without needing to actually kill them.

Again, this is just a little experimentation piece I did for shits and giggles. I may use the ideas behind it later on.

[darkmatterbutterflies]

251258 Ahhhhh I see; you're linking blood and emotion. That's an interesting conceit there, and it certainly makes for vampire changlings. What fascinating lore that would allow for! It certainly explains the fangs.

Also, it makes the second season finale retroactively over-awesome, because it has an army of shape-shifting vampires, led by their vampire queen, invading Canterlot for the sweet, sweet love of the innocent ponies that live in Equestria. During which, these six: beat the holes out of a horde of vampires. Then, one of them thinks to use the spooky powerful magic mind control powers of, you know, her childhood babysitter who is also magic royalty, to explode them away via the detonation of the mutual love she shares with her magic-shield-generating hunky military captain lover. For a cartoon aimed at 6ish-14ish year old girls, that is weirdly baddass, and, uh, ever just so slightly fetishistic.

Seriously, though, if you were going to use this, you'd have my attention!

[FanOfMostEverything]

I like it. I like it very much. Especially the idea of having to drain blood instead of just emotions from humans given their lower ambient magic. Or something. I hope you do make use of this.