New chapter! · 2:25pm Jul 24th, 2012
The rewrite has been done. Only a few minor points remain. But I'll adress them when I have time.
I'm happy to say the main things are all done now. I can confidently continue with the story, without worrying about adding in something that will seem to appear out of nowwhere.
The main two changes are:
There has been a mergeing of the first two chapters with missing details added.
Soarin' and Spitfire also make an earlier appearance than I initialy planned and so have been added to the core character list. If you chose to re-read the first few chapters (please do) you will see what I mean. They will both make some signifcant impacts later on in the cute couple's life.
Anyway. Please read and don't forget to drop a comment too. I'm super keen to know how well the latest chapter works (or doesn't work) for all you ponies.
Also... seeing evidence of my audiences enjoyment (or dislike) always gives me a boost and helps keep me motivated. It really does.
4 chapters down... plenty more to come.
The story is improving a lot, I can't wait to read the rest of it once it's finished!
By the way, I finished my pre-reading of the latest chapter if you want to have a look at it. I hope all the coloring doesn't scare you, I had a lot of time on my hands and wanted to help out as best as I could. Let me know what you think.
AWSOME LOVE IT! Hope to see more soon.