Jun
21st
2015
Attention all Readers of "Careful What you Wish For" · 2:40pm Jun 21st, 2015
Now I'm gunna start off the bat by saying I'm deleting the entire story. Scrapping it. I know you guys liked it but looking back its taste felt way more immature for someone of my age. I've been working on a rewrite for some time but work and writers block has kept my interest. Over the next six days I promise to iron out the first chapter and find a reviewer to proof read it for mistakes. I'm planning to go the same route as The Scent: Lust of Mares in that all females will be larger then our Protagonist. I'm on the fence about what kind of enemies to incorporate but expect a much darker version of our Light Hearted telling before. I will give you all a day to voice your opinions on this before deleting the story.
See you all soon Cowboy.
Glad to hear you're back on the story. While I'm ok with the Ponies being larger my only real concern is saying that you're going the same route as The Scent. Are they going to have bodies proportional to their height or are they going to be carrying literal 50 gallon jugs and be insatiably horney all the time? Not going to lie, The Scent isnt exactly a favorite fic which is where the concern come from.
3168520 both of your concerns are valid and you'll be happy to know that they arn't. Mostly due to the fact that, here is a spoiler, there are no stallions. I'll expand on this in the future but their sec drives are near non existent due to no males in their society. So think of it as an Amazonian Society. Belly might take a Dragon as a night partner but she never calls him back.