I need Twilight Sparkle experts · 2:35am May 29th, 2015
To look at chapter three of Luna's Lacunae.
I actually kind of want Twilight Sparkle to be as much in character as possible. Kinda gawky, kinda nerdy, but still so very caring and kind.
If someone or several someones could have a look and tell me what they think, I'd appreciate it. It was an awkward scenario, but a believable scenario, and I'm genuinely curious if I could have written it better or if I did okay or if I should make any nudges to Twilight's character in future interactions.
Thank you in advance!