cking ever. Yes, I still censor myself for all the kiddies out there (like me). I'm older than I was when I came onto the website but that's totally beside the point. I'm still young...not young enough, but also not old enough. When I say that I mean I'm technically still not allowed to read clop fiction but obviously I still
The Domino Theory · 10:56pm May 27th, 2015
SO, I guess there are a couple of peeps saying I should slow down my narrative in my latest story: The Domino Theory. I'd like to say, not in my defense, that my writing has changed and that I like it as it is now...though, I do understand what peeps are saying. My stories escalate quickly, but only because I like getting right to the point. If any of my followers out there could check out the story and give me their opinions, that would be great! The only reason I'm a little hesitant to go on with my way of writing instead of taking the advice I've been given (I'm grateful for it, too) is because I don't think it would stop peeps from reading it--I'm sure it'll stop some peeps since I'm being a bit ignorant about it, though.
I'll try to alter my writing a bit, so hang in there, guys! And, yes, I also am aware that some of my grammar is funky. It's a transitional period for me...not sure how well the process will end up. But, I will be editing the two chapters I've submitted TONIGHT (hopefully)! I'm glad that the peeps that DID say something told me politely. Not sure if it's a hard thing to come by these days, but never the less I thank you two again! 
