R4 (Reactions, Reviews, Reference, Redirection) #0166 · 9:13pm May 15th, 2015
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Here are five slightly edited old reviews:
Burnout by NotARealPonydotcom
The Ultimate Alicorn by Cerulean Voice
One Awesome Mom by moguera
Scootalift by Estee
Igniting The Flame of a Rainbow by Rumble
Burnout by NotARealPonydotcom
[story link] [my original review]
Another fluff piece, but this one had a bit more oomph to it than the one directly previous. It actually felt like a piece of a story. I like this kind of fluffy slice of life. No real story, just a single moment in somepony’s life. This made me want to know what happens next, and that’s a good thing. Even for something as fluffy as this. Just found out through the author’s notes on this one that there is a whole 30 some stories set in this particular AU. Might have to check out some of the others, at some point.
The Ultimate Alicorn by Cerulean Voice
[story link] [my original review]
A very dark look at an alternate ending for season 4. If you like what-if alternative universes, check it out. Or if you like darker stories. If you don’t like violence or dark, you should stay away from this one.
One Awesome Mom by moguera
[story link] [my original review]
This was fun. One of the better Scootaloo family fanfics I’ve read. Not that I’ve read a lot in that particular sub-sub-category. Mostly just a handful of Scootaloo orphan fanfics. This one even had a touch of worldbuilding about Pegasus eating fish on occasion, but slipped in as a throw-away line about them making dinner.
Scootalift by Estee
[story link] [my original review]
Had an interesting premise and bits of a cool author style, but the writing in general is a bit rough and the story doesn’t go anywhere. This is more of a good synopsis of a story than the story itself. Still, pretty neat.
Also incomplete, so I'm waiting for it to finish up so I can read the whole thing.
Igniting The Flame of a Rainbow by Rumble
[story link] [my original review]
This just couldn’t keep my attention. The writing is rough and the content is shallow. Plus Soarin is portrayed as a empty-headed and pre-teen in mannerisms. I’d recommend this author keep practicing, but for readers to skip this particular work and check back for later more practiced stories.
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