So i've been doing stuff...wanna see?

so i started writing something awhile ago...what is it?...Obviously i'm not telling but i'll let you check it out so far..

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It was bright and early on a Monday morning when a train pulled into Canterlot. As it came to a stop and the doors opened a flood of young ponies came flooding out of the doors. Some ran, some walked and others simply tried not to be trampled as everyone started to head towards a single place, Canterlot High. IT was the first day of the new school year and from all the ponies that flocked to it to learn, there was a mixture of emotions. Older students were excited to be back while the newest freshmen students were filled with a little more trepidation.

When the flood of ponies finally came to a stop it seemed quieter on the train platform before the last passengers finally were able to get off, one of them fully voicing her approval of the situation.

“FINALLY! I thought we’d never be abe to get out. Hurry everyone I wanna get to school!” the filly bounced eagerly on her hooves, her eyes sparkling bright at the prospect of being able to learn at a higher pace from their primary school. Anypony on the platform was a bit surprised when they saw her. It wasn’t her beige coat and here grass green mane and tail; each with their own purple stripe, nor her enthusiasm. What most people stopped to look at was that she had a horn and a pair of wings. Anybody going to school was now wondering what an Alicorn was doing attending high school
“Hope calm down.” Came a male voice from inside the train car. “The train gets here super early so we have plenty of time before classes start, calm down little you’re starting to sound like Doppler,” a colt walked out who seemed jst as odd as the Alicorn. He wore a par of blue sunglasses and what looked like a bartender’s get up, a white long sleeve button down shirt and a black vest on top of it. Besides that his fur, mane and tail were all the same dark blue grey.

“Phey! I tafe ophrenze wif tha!” another filly emergerd from the train car and again bystanders were giving looks. Her hair poofy and pink which matched her coat all except for her hooves which were a dark neon blue. Her cheek puffed out like a hamster before with a loud gulping noise she swallowed. “What’s wrong with me Gaia?” she asked looking between the colt outside and whoever was left inside.

“Besides the fact that probably nopony else in Equestria eats ‘second breakfast’?” another filly stepped out and this time it had a bit of a different reaction. While any other filles standing there kept looking at the slowly growing group of odd ponies, many colt’s jaws hit the ground as this one came out. Wild flowing golden mane, fiery orangey yellow fur and solid lilac eyes combined with a curvy muscled body causing her image to be filed in every present colts mind under bombshell. Another thing that made her stand out was that she wore two large gold bracelets on her forehooves, they seemed heavy but she didn’t seemed to notice.

“And besides the fact that almost nopony else in Equestria would try to eat that much for breakfast without wanting to literally explode!” came a voice form inside the car and then a cyan blur felw out of the car so fast that a few of the ponies that tried to follow it almost got whiplash. With a screeching sound the blur slowed down and hooves scarped across the stone of the train platform. “OW HOT HOT HOT!” ponies looked at the pegasus that was the blue blur quickly blowing on her hooves to redices the heat on them from when she made her own skid marks. The one thing that stood out was her multicolored mane and tail. She had three different colored stripes; red, blue and yellow and bgetwwen each of them was a stripe of silver

“Honestly Chroma, I think we should all be fine with it as long as she doesn’t bring up any other long lost forgotten meal times like elevenses or luncheon, ” This time it was a fillies turn for their jaws to hit the floor as a colt stepped off the train. He wasn’t as big as the other colt who had already gotten off but he looked just as tough. His body looked chiseled, not overtly so as a body builder but enough to show the curve of muscle underneath his fur. “You’re the one that knows more about old traditions, manners and mannerisms Flair, what do you think?” The colt turns toward the train car as another pony stepped out.

She reminded everypony around her of snow with her white coat and mane and tail of almost the same color, while her coat was pure whiteher hair hide a little mix of both blue and green in it. Another standout was that she was dressed as well but her clothes were nicer than the bartender looking colt. She wore a white jacket and skirt. All in all many colts on the platform would have called her perfect but as they stared they noticed the faint dark line of a scar going down the right side of her face over her eye. “Well it’s just Doppler being Doppler. As long as it makes her happy…and doesn’t make a mess on my good clothes I find it perfectly fine,” she talked with a sense of sophistication that showed that she liked to be prim and proper. “Now I suggest we make our way towards school we can’t stay here forever…” she started to say but trailed off as she gave a look towards the train car. She paused for a couple of seconds before her small smile quickly turned into a scowl. “Junior will you get off the train already!”

After the filly called to whomever on the train ponies could hear the movement of it. IT must have been heavy since the train began to creak in a rhythmic pattern and slightly sway from side to side. People looking into the train though the windows could only see a large dark shape making it’s way to the door. Finally after tense seconds all the other ponies got a look at “Junior”. Some gasped, some ran away and another fainted as the bipedal dragon got out of the train car and it sprang up slightly after losing the weight. He stood twice as tall as the first colt that came out, his scales were a dark gray green, and his eyes a bright yellow with just a hint of red, and if anypony got past look at that they could see his spines that ran from the top of his head and all the way down his back almost to the tip of his tail. They ranged in size; the largest situated in thew middle of his back while the ones on top of his head were small enough to be mistken for hair. From a distance they seemed to be a pearly white but up close if you looked hard enough you could that each had a blueish violet hue to them.

He gave a quick look around quickly noticing older ponies trying not to make eye contact with him and many younger foals looking at him in awe. “HEY G! YOU’RE GONNA GET LEFT BEHIND!” his attention turned to the group he was with, who had begun to leave him behind as they made their way off the platform and into the city to go to school. With a roll of his eyes and a huff he smiled and began to walk closing the gap between him and his friends.

“First day of high school huh?” he mused to himself, form his height he could see over and through the see of teenage ponies all flocking to one spot. “Good thing I know I won’t be the oddest thing there,” he said out loud as he caught up with his group catching the gaze of Gaia who laughed in return.

“What me? I swear I’m going to try my hardest to be on my absolute best behavior today, G,” he said looking up at the dragon. “I want to try to stay under the radar for at least one day,” he said with pride much to the chagrin of his friends who began laughing as they continued walking with the crowd.
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there's a little taste of something new...also i'm looking for an artist to commission some artwork...anybody particularly skilled at drawing individual ponies...if you are or know anyone please contact me...please?