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Shadowflame


It's been a while, but I'm back home! Don't know when I'll write something for this site again, but enjoy my other stuff in the meantime!

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  • 463 weeks
    Delays

    Hey guys, just wanted to make this quick.

    I'm sorry to say that I won't be able to get any chapters for 'Cool Story Bro... MOAR PONIES!' out for the next little while, a few days maybe, because my family is cleaning up our whole house, moving some furniture, and I've been having to help out a lot. It doesn't help that I have a full-time job now, so I barely find any time for writing.

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  • 464 weeks
    FNAF scares me in real life... again

    So yeah, I just got a new job this week, which would explain my inconsistencies in my chapter releases, but that's beside the point. So, one of my co-workers, his phone's ringtone is a platypus cry, which is basically a series of organic like clicks.

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  • 466 weeks
    Cool Story Bro 3!

    The Third story of Cool Story Bro has passed moderation and is now visible on FIMFiction!!

    You can find it under my stories tab on my user page ('cause I'm posting this on mobile and can't put a proper link).

    Thanks for reading!
    -Shadowflame

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  • 467 weeks
    I'm coming home!

    I'm on my way home! After two weeks out of the main land of the United States, I'm driving to Utah from Montana.

    I have chapters ready, but I've gotta go now!

    Thanks for reading!
    -Shadowflame

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  • 470 weeks
    Can't talk long

    Mooching off my neighbor's Internet.

    My Internet went down, I've been busy moving furniture to help repaint my family's house, and I'm leaving tomorrow for a three week trip through Canada.

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    2 comments · 479 views
Apr
23rd
2015

I Need Ideas · 3:07pm Apr 23rd, 2015

Hey, guys!

So I'm working on the next chapter of Freddy Fazbear and Friends, but I'm feeling a bit... unsure. I'm not sure if I'm going to like what I have in mind, and I'm not sure if you'll like it either. So I thought, "Why don't I ask what they want?"

This isn't a "Tell me exactly what to do" kind of thing. I just want some ideas from you that I can bounce around. This way, I can see exactly what would both please my readers and keep the story from taking a bad turn.

Give me all you've got!
Thanks for reading!
-Shadowflame

Comments ( 6 )

I want something King of the Hill related.

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Or maybe have BB do a scream/jumpscare like in FNaF3, kinda like a hint of foreshadowing or something.

How about some kind of interaction with Rarity which makes the ex-animatronics get a small urge to wear clothes again, like they did when they used to be humans. It may be a way that it will help them remember who they were unconsciously or something.

Maybe add a one time thing of them trying to stay awake throughout the night, but experience for the first time sleepiness in a long time, considering that they may have only experienced being turned on or off. Which may lead to them thinking that they are sick or malfunctioning or something.

Or how about you make a one time joke of that silly, and very colorful in language, Five Night's at F*ckboys? One line that Freddy and Toy Freddy said a lot was "Inhale my dong". And I'm sure you can make some kind of joke with just the word inhale.

Animatronic get-together at the Town Square, maybe... Golden Freddy starts a panic and then the others show up? Maybe?

You could always get Springtrap involved.

Well, in a way, each animatronic is simultaneously a 20 year old angry monster and a 10 year old lost child. Try playing on this discrepency.

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Hm... not a bad idea

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