500 Likes! · 1:47am Mar 11th, 2015
Honestly guys, I never thought that Tsup would ever get this amount of upvotes. I was honestly hoping for like 250 by the time the story was done. You really have no idea how much it means to me that 500+ people enjoy what I do.
So thank, really, thank you.
For this landmark, I thought it would be cool to give you guys a quick synopsis on what the first iteration of Tsup looked like in my mind. Also, at no points does it turn dark, although there are some mind control/manipulation bits.
Firstly, Asmodeus wasn't the benevolent archdemon of Lust that he is. He was still an archdemon, but was much more of a dick. Him and Celestia have a strongly negative relationship because he is the only pony that can satisfy her during her heat, he thinks shes just a goody goody two-shoes, and they really hate each others guts.
So the story starts with Celestia summoning him, clop scene happens. And then by plot convenience and deux ex machina Asmodeus escapes the summoning circle and to somewhere in Equestria. Celestia sends out a manhunt to find him. He, however, disguises himself as an abnormally large and attractive, but otherwise normal Pegasus.
Surprise surprise, he winds up in Ponyville. Finds Vinyl coming out of her gig, uses some incubus magic, takes her back to her house and fucks her brains out. Plot happens, and the Asmodeus convinces her to confess her love to Octavia next time she goes to Canterlot. This Asmodeus still gets ponies together, but not for love, simply for the fact that the more sex ponies near him have the more powerful he gets.
Next morning, Vinyl leaves for a job in Canterlot, and Asmodeus stays at her apartment. He walks around town, and then meets Applejack.
I didn't really get much farther than that before it turned into what we currently know as Tsup, but essentially him and Applejack fall in love, in this version Asmodeus could feel it, and the whole "Honesty" thing comes into play. He ends up getting Rainbow and Twilight together somehow, because Twidash is otp. And then him and applejack and Twilight and Rainbow form a couple's couple thing where one couple dates the other, was going to have a whole take on herds going on there. And when they all get invited to Canterlot for the royal wedding with chrysalis and all that jazz, he is found out.
Chrysalis offers to let him rule Equestria by her side, but then Twilight comes back, this time she's with Rainbow because they're together at this point, and then more plot happens and chrysalis gets thrown out. And then happy ever after ending in which asmodeus gives up his throne and they all live happily ever after.
So yea, that's that What do you guys think of it? Do you prefer the current version of Tsup or that? If you have any questions about Tsup, the Tsup universe, or want to ask me something in general feel free to do so.
Also, if you haven't checked it out yet, go read my latest fic here. Its shameless clop set in the Tsup universe after Asmodeus leaves. The soarindash sequel isn't being worked on yet, but I'll get to it when the second and final chapter of the linked story is done.
That's it for now,
Gold4tune out, /) pce
I like the new one more.
Mindcontrol clop isn't my favorite.
And new Asmodeus is a sad but cool stalion.
I also like this version more, clop with story is best clop^^
I really do hope, you continue your TSUP-universe(AJ getting a somepony and Twilight too; maybe finding a cure for Asmodeus and they get together ;) ) and I also hope, you deepen the background of when Tia and Lulu are not princesses, etc....all in all, pls continue your work
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Currently there are no plans for Asmodeus to be "cured" as you put it. Him not feeling love isn't a disease or something that happened to him. Its just how he is.
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yeah, ofc i dind`t meant it as a disease, wrong choice of words :P but still, would be awesome if he could be helped ;)
I think I could say with confidence that I like this Asy more, but I would admit that if executed well, the former storyline could actually be fun and interesting.
As an aside, the comments actually got me thinking about it; would also be VERY interesting to see a short one in an AU that explores some dialogue and stuff between an older Ascended Alicorn Twilight. Whether depressed that she outlived her friends and family, or mayhaps just a newer generation that came across his summoning tome. Yadda yadda. But then, I find a strange amount of entertainment is bringing the ponies down just to help them back up. @w@