Jan
9th
2012
HI! · 10:03pm Jan 9th, 2012
Hi everybrony. This is my first blog so I'll try and get to the point. I need a little help.
I'd like some ideas for my fanfics, since I've come to a little road block. Yeah, so I'm apology for not uploading so often.
So, leave some more comments, about your thoughts, ideas, or generally talk about parts I've written that you enjoyed or disliked.
And, if any would be so kind, locate some artists. A few pictures of my works would really cheer me up and help my imagination get flowing again.
So, until next time.
Sincerely,
Evowizard25
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I've only read your Chaotica story Evo, I'm already tracking loads of other stories at the moment so I haven't had a chance to read some of your other stories but hopefully I'll get round to it.
Anyway's my only advice for that story is keep adding your personal touches to that story. I can imagine you re-enacting the failed first invasion by having the guards ponies already waiting and prepared followed by them chasing Discord and his army away. They then gather at Twilight's library much to her chagrin and discuss other ways to de-throne Celestia. Perhaps have Twilight accidentally point out they'd have a better chance if they actually used weapons and have Lyra show up and go all obsessive over Dr. Smith because he has hands. This could ultimately lead to recruiting Lyra by promising her hands and we could have Screwball return just at the end of the chapter annoyed she was left out of the planning.
We would then be treated to a montage of the various characters acquiring their weapons like Pinkie's Party Cannon, or have Quizzler have a staff like the Riddler's and Luna dress in full battle regalia and using the royal Canterlot voice (Fus ro Dah joke potential). Alternatively you could have them all gather this stuff up and succeed in the initial battle whatever you fell works best. Just try to have some fun with your stories as well as make them enjoyable
4388 Oh, I love to have fun with my fanfics. That's why I became a writer. And, now that I think on it, YOU ARE A GENIOUS! I'm already preparing a few things, but your ideas are simply too marvelous to pass up. I shall endeavour to finish the fic soon. Actually, I'm almost finished with chapter 4. I still need to work out the kinks. I'll publish it either tomorrow or Thursday. But thanks for the ideas. I really appreciate them.
I enjoyed Chapter 4 Evo, really well written and fun.
Glad you liked my first set of ideas, I see you used my idea for Screwball in your own way and added plenty of original humour
. I hope Chapter 5 has that scene where Discord/Nostalgia Critic tries to convince Spoony/Luna to give in to the Madness 
and then have Pinkie Pie encourage her saying she'll feel much Happier of she does 
, and have everyone else try to talk her out of the idea.
Also I can totally see The Master pointing out how flawed the plan was, just running and yelling loudly was bound to fail. I still think you should have them meet at Twilight's library too
, and have her telling them to rent a book or leave :). Also I know I mentioned adding Lyra but then I took a look at how big Discord's army is and you probably have a hard enough time making screen time for 26 characters in Discord's army and Celestia.
Discord's Army
Discord
Ditzy Doo
Carrot Top
Jet Set
Upper Crust
Princess Luna
Prince Blueblood
Screwball
The three Diamond Dogs
The Great and Powerful Trixie
Pinkie Pie
Gilda
The Master
Photo Finish
Diamond Tiara
Silver Spoon
Scootaloo
Apple Bloom
Sweetie Belle
Quizzler
Surprise
Traxoric a.k.a Bob
Ackuna a.k.a Acme
Snips
Snails
Dr. Smith
4497 Yeah, I have a load on my plate, but don't worry, I had that scene kind of already played out in my head for a while.
I really appreciate the time and effort you put into these reviews. They are long and enjoyable to read and they certainly bring a smile to my face.
Oh, and lastly, how did you know I based Quizzler off the Riddler.
Are you a spy?
Nah Evo I'm no spy. Merely a dedicated fan who happens to enjoy a wide variety of media ranging from Movies and Videogames to Books and Fanfiction. I Particularly love crossovers when they're done well (Like your lovely story
) and couldn't help draw my conclusions of Quizzler being similar to the Riddler in some regards but his friendship/history with The Master was unexpected but very welcome.
Also do you plan on doing anything with the old blind stallion in Chapter 3? Just wondering about him is all, and who's looking after Ditzy's kids Sparkler and Dinky? Maybe Discord should bring them along in the next attack
4506 Usually, I would decline from spoilers, but what the heck, You're a friend and friends stick together.
I suggest you at least read Resistance: Equestria. I have to say that fic is my best work since, well, ever. Oh, and I should mention, Chaotica is kind of a sequel of that story. I know, I should have waited to finish R:E first, but I couldn't wait. Besides, Chaotica doesn't have much to do with the other. It just expands the universe I'm creating.
Yes, I plan on usuing the blind stallion. More so in another story I've thought up. As well as a story using The Master, Quizzler, and none other then the mysterious voice himself.
And if you love crossovers, then we have something in common. I'm a crossover nut.
Oh, Sparkler is looking after Dinky. My mom left me to watch my younger brothers and sister all the time. Even when I was rather young.
I can't wait to see your next comment.
Sincerely,
Evo
Yeah My parent's trusted my older brother to look after me and my brother growing up so it makes sense that Ditzy isn't overly worried about the kids with Sparkler being a responsible sister n all.
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Also I promise to give Resistance Equestria a thorough read soon, I'm catching up on one or two stories I was tracking that finished recently but I've been reading and writing and missed out on chapters. Currently the main story I'm catching up on is Fallout: Equestria - Pink Eyes, I'm on Ch.15 now on 6 to go I'll be sad to see it end, it's one of my fave Fallout: Equestria stories.
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Do you plan on having the characters dress up in costumes like in Kickassia? I can only imagine Discord dressed up as M.Bison, Maybe Derpy as Cardcaptor Sakura which would be a good way to make a shout out to this awesome flash animation Derpy Cardcaptor. It would also be funny to see Discord's army attack only to find the gates closed, so they bring up the small step which is too small and then the ladder which is too vertical and then have Screwball or Carrot top or The Master simply open the gate by pushing it open, whilst everyone is arguing. Thus having Celestia Trolling Discord before the battle has truly begun a bit like Home Alone (Oh me and my devious mind
)
This is also going to sound weird but bear with me, I think you should try to work in a sock joke. The reason why can be best summed up in this story I read a while ago which is both wacky and awesome. Socks of Wrath
Oh yeah, I forgot to ask if you'd ever read the Button Stitch Story that led me to ask about Screwball in my comment on your story
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Well in case you're interested it's three stories I'll provide a link to the first chapter of each story. You can find the next chapter of each story at the bottom of each story. I.e. when you finish a chapter, scroll down to the author's comment where the author Warrenhutch leaves links to the next chapter of the story. (Sorry for over-explaining hyped up on sugary drinks
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Story 1: The Turning of the Screwball
Story 2 Screwball Mio Amore
Story 3 Screwball Over
4531 Fallout Equestria: Pink Eye is the only Fallout Equestria I'll read. I find the world too depressing and I can't stand the thought of Celestia dead. (On a side note, I am planning a fic in that universe as well. Though, I need to finish Resistance: Equestria first.)
Yes, that is why I brough Photo Finish along. Who else could get them all dressed up.
Celestia trolling Discord...Me likey.
Socks...I shall have socks...Oh and I'll use...SHUT UP! I'm spoiling...Oh well, not many people read my stories. (I keep getting rejected by Equestria Daily, so I stopped sending them my work.)
I'll take that Screwball story a looksee.
Out of curiosity, did you ever finish reading Kkhat's Fallout: Equestria? It was one of the most emotion wrenching stories I ever read, small spoiler Celestia isn't exactly dead, now your curiosity will make you want to finish the story
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Hope you enjoy all the stuff I linked you to
4536 Okay, I'll be honest, I haven't read Fallout: Equestria.
Oh, and don't worry, I'll enjoy. Actually, I quite enjoy our little talks. We should do them more often, fanfic buddy.
I enjoy these little chats of ours as well :).
Just wanted to say I have enjoyed your portrayal of the characters in your story. And look forward to seeing how you might use some of the ideas I've given with the characters you've written. Ah yes I also found a fic which Makes Luna look like Dr Insano, if your interested, it includes Discord, Trollestia & Nightmare Moon with a heaping of methodical madness and insanity. Canterlot Crazies.
I read your Resistance story. I was taken aback by how good it was
. Nice work 
4584 I have to honestly say that Resistance: Equestria is my personal gem. It's the greatest thing I've ever come up with and I'm proud of my work. Although, Equestria Daily has kept turning it down.
I wish they would post it. I love it dearly.
Yeah it would be nice if your story got featured. It just needs a bigger following. If that Screwball/Button stitch story can make it on Equestria Daily, then this Resistance story should be on there too, it's really a shame to see it is not on there already
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