Update 8/3/15 · 1:31am Mar 8th, 2015
*Rarity walks in and reads Heart Beats.*
SCREEEEEEEM!!!!!!!! *flips coffee table and hides behind it.*
What is it Rarity, is the house on fire! Are there rats in the house!
The p-puntuation and gr-grammar is this story is so bad that it's terrifying.
Aww, come on, it can be that bad. *opens book* Holy HorseApples, Celestia dam it, send it to Tartarus, KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!! *throws book into the corner and also hinds behind coffee table*
Are you sure it isn't a new villain for season 6?
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The whole entire story (as in chapter 1-4) of Heart Beats is going to get a minor make over. The plot and events will still be the same but it'll mostly be about the grammar and punctuation.
story updates
chapter 6 can be expected to be released somewhere in late April or earlier.
There will be a special chapter (5.5) coming out on the 30th (this time without any delays)
Here's the quote for that chapter
"I find your lack in faith disturbing"
-Darth Vader
signing out
Colt Bolt
Hey, how could you! You didn't even ask me D:
Lol, glad to see you are reviewing your earlier chapters! Even the oldest of works can use a read-through again. Never know what you missed until you come back to it later.
By the way, I find your lack of grammar... disturbing...
*your
Sorry, I'm just gonna stop typing now...
2863200 Why do i feel like hanging myself? JK
thanks