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SparkStone


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  • 163 weeks
    Slamming my head

    I was hoping to post the story this month, but that didn't happen

    I'm just not satisfied with how I laid it out

    To explain why this particular chapter is taking so long, well... I guess I would say that this would be considered a pretty big shift in the story, one that leads to the next section of it all.

    It's a pain in the butt, because the chapter lead up to 4000 words

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    3 comments · 451 views
  • 183 weeks
    Ko-Fi and plans

    Welp, here we are again.

    I'm still getting messages that you guys are commenting, faving, and rereading Alex's care taker.

    I wasn't into the idea of writing two stories at once, but this time, I decide to do it on the side. It's been proving therapeutic for me. and that's time better spent than sitting around waiting for my noggin to feel better.

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  • 263 weeks
    To all of my readers

    Thank you for waiting so patiently after over 2 years of absence. Things really have changed in the course of that time. I apologize for the excessively long wait, and the only thing I can provide, even now, is a heartfelt apology.

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    4 comments · 574 views
  • 336 weeks
    Net Neutrality: Have you done your part?

    How many of you have participated so far?

    Remember, the reason why our net is still up and running is thanks to Net Neutrality. The freedom to go on the web without paying the extra bucks. Besides entertainment, we also use it for communication, education, information, and so on.

    If you haven't gone on yet, do it now!

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    0 comments · 428 views
  • 337 weeks
    Semester ending, final stretch

    As some may know, I am in college.
    This semester, I transferred to a university.

    That's why posting chapters is harder and harder.

    This semester I had a class that was really hard. (Because apparently teacher's here make stuff harder. It's not just the course, lol)

    But now that the semester is ending, and there's only a little more to do, I will be writing again.

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Feb
24th
2015

Heart Plus: If you're a fan, you better read this... · 2:17am Feb 24th, 2015

I haven't been posting much. That's a fact.
There is a reason. That's an opinion.

I'm working hard at school, doing writing for Star Gazer on script organizing, and trying my best to keep my mind steady. But there's always in issue. Even though I work bit by bit on my stories, there's one that I always have trouble continuing EVER. This was my first story, Heart Plus: Dawn Arc.

I can no longer guarantee its continuation. I will however tell you things that I had planned.
Kasin is the main character and a part of the core of the Dawn Arc, but after that, he is just a main character like the mane 6. In fact, the planned sequel, Dusk Arc, does not have him at all in it's beginning.

The reason why so many ponies have a crush on Kasin is because, the story later splits into arcs you can select. in fact, this was supposed to be a three arc story.

The beginning lets you choose the Dawn Arc, or the Sunrise Arc.
The Sunrise Arc brings Kasin, not into Ponyville, but into Canterlot instead, and meets Princess Celestia first.

The middle arc was going to be Dusk Arc. There's nothing else to select. Nightfall Arc was thought up at one point, but had nothing different.

The last arc allowed you to choose who was to be with Kasin. There were 6 candidates that you could choose. Rarity and Pinkie are not one of them.

The ending would promise Kasin a better life, along with his friends andhis own family.

To be honest, I do love this idea still, but it's now a complete mess. I can barely remember much, and it was a complex structure to begin with. If I wanted to do anything with these ideas, it would be to start over. I would make Kasin into a different character. One where the personality isn't a total mess. Or maybe the complete opposite. I recently played a certain game, and loved this specific personality. I in fact, wanted to use it in a story.

To all of my fans, I deeply apologize for this news. I know for some, it's not at all a shocker, but for the next try at it, I hope to avoid the incident of hatred. If any of you at all are interested in a reboot in the series with new characters, but possibly maintaining the main concept, comment below, and tell me what you think as well as suggestions.
If your suggestion is to continue Heart Plus from where I left off, I'll at least say this. "I tried, and I will keep trying, but from this point, it seems unlikely. But I'm definitely not shooting the story dead. I won't even say it's cancelled. I'm too stubborn of a mess to do that."

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Comments ( 1 )

Well I'm a fan of the story and was wondering how it was gonna finish. But a reboot might be a good idea. Who's to say it wont be better than the original story or even bring new inspiration for the old. Cant wait to see what new adventure you cook up for Kasin and his friends.

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