Looking for pre-readers · 5:31am Feb 21st, 2015
I'm looking for some serious pre-readers/editors to take on the task of wading through my abysmal grammar, my horrible spelling, and my downright stupid punctuation errors.
Any interested parties should contact me through Fim-mail (as I like to call it) with their interest and any examples of their editing/pre-reading experience.
As a treat, I shall give you a short taste of the next chapter.
The entire room full of ponies stood shocked as the young Prince and Princess vanished from their midst. They had no sooner healed Rarities newest filly when they so completely disappeared from the castle, it was as if they had never set hoof in it before. To say that Twilight and Luna were shocked would be the understatement of the century; both mares were beside themselves with disbelief, unmoving as statues. Unfortunately, they were not the only ones. Another pair of mares, the young intendeds of the Prince and Princess, were also left wondering about their betrothed.
It was finally Cadence that broke the eerie pall of the room. “Guards, search this castle from top to bottom, Shining, get a message back to Canterlot, the Crystal Empire, and the Everfree Estate, I want all the castles thoroughly searched! I want Dusk and Dawn found!”
“But what if they’re not at either of the castles?” Shining Armor asked, obviously worried about his niece and nephew as well.
“Then you will take the troops out and search the countryside.” Cadence decreed. The Alicorn of Love moved to console her sisters in law. “Don’t worry Twilight, Aunt Luna, we’ll find them, we’ll leave no stone unturned until the twins are back at home.”
I VOLUNTEER AS TRIBUTE!
I mean um...I would be more than happy to pre-read. Your stories are what helped me start my first fic after all
i sent you a mail some time ago to help your story in every way i could ;) i would love to help^^
2817355 I remember that, I'll keep you in mind as I will be running the chapters through at least three people.
2818470 would love to^^ i would even dare to read your stories again(would be the 4th or 5th time already) to smooth out your epic tale. The last time i read your stories, i vaguely remember some typos and some their/they´re errors, if i´m not mistaken ;)
I´m not that good at writing stories but i can sense errors in spelling, if I´m familiar with the language. Maybe i can make myself famous as a proofreader....XD
I would love to pre-read for you any time. I love you series!!please tell me that Dusk and Dawn can be brought back all right??!!