Paragon Character Profile: Aegis hammer · 9:34pm Feb 7th, 2015
Aegis Hammer
Gender: Mare
Tribe: Pegasus
Cutie Mark and Special Talent: Tower Shield and Helmet - representing her ability to expertly smith various armours and shields.
Description: Aegis Hammer is a large, well-built Albatross-Type pegasus. She has a ruddy-brown coat with white specks on her shoulders and withers, and mint green eyes. Even when compared to most Earth Ponies, Aegis is large and muscular due to her years working as a blacksmith. Her massive wingspan allows her to remain in flight for hours at a time and she regularly exercises to keep up her physique.
History: Aegis prefers to keep quiet about her fillyhood and those that know about it respect her enough to also remain silent. Shortly after discovering her cutie mark, Aegis elected to move out of Cloudsdale into Canterlot to pursue her talent. After a few short years, the increasing competition drove her to abandon smithing and enlist in the Guard instead. Due to her stalwart and friendly nature she made it up the ranks before finally being offered the position of becoming a Paragon Guard.
Personality: Aegis Hammer is happy-go-lucky and enjoys a good prank, laugh or joke every once in a while. She is loyal to a fault to the other Paragon and firmly believed in nurturing and encouraging the growth of others’ talents. She is a long-standing member of the Paragon, already familiar with all their traditions and nuances. One of her favourite things are ‘added alliterative appeals’ and will jump at the opportunity to use one whenever possible.
She is also extremely jealous of how Leaf Brambles is continuously being hit on by other ponies.
Would like to see chapters of the Guards before they were guards *nudge nudge wink wink*
NICE!
Maybe at the beginning of each of your chapters state the POV of who's narrating, that would help too.
Either way, I really like this, so nice work!