Help!

Hey,

So, I'm writers-road-blocked on 'Madame Butterfly' (also, from the grab-bag of writer's excuses I see that work has been kicking my arse). I'm, well, I'm Iron Willing my way through it. But I don't want to make Fluttershy cry, and I could really use some assistance in making sure I haven't hashed it horribly.

More simply, I could use a pre-reader or two. Expressions of interest by personal message, please, or post in the comments below.

Yours,

JMH