Aftermath of a Fallen Updated

Yeah, quick, to the point, and a bit of a hit for the future sequel. Enjoy

Comments

[WhitewolfStormrunner]

So we're getting a sequel to this one, huh? Excellent.

Although what Philomena told Peewee has me a more than a little nervous, in more ways than one:

“The deer would not tell me. Only to beware of the one whose name goes with royalty.”

This...sounds more than a little omnious, doesn't it?

Still, I can't help but wonder just who this could be. Former Prince Blueblood was disgraced, tried with the rest of his co-conspirators, and then executed. So, just by reason of that, that leaves him out.

It's...confusing, to say the very least.

Well, I'm guessing that we'll have to wait til the sequel to find that one out, huh?

Can't wait.

[Jake The Army Guy]

What you need to do is get to Spike and Shining Armor...

[Rated Ponystar]

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Spike is the last chapter, Shining Armor will come

[Jake The Army Guy]

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Coolio! Also, you should have used this for the torture scene:

[ZemaBato]

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I have a suspicion on who it is. To me, it kind of seems obvious, but that's only if I'm right.

[WhitewolfStormrunner]

2752325 Cool. Can't wait to see if you are right!

On that note, PM me with your hunch? I'd like to hear who you think that the threat is.

Me, I'm thinking that it isn't Luna. Too obvious.

[ZemaBato]

2752335 Now we just have to wait for that next sequel.

[WhitewolfStormrunner]

2752340 Indeed.

And thanks for the PM. I'll give a perusal now and let you know what I think.

[DreadedCandiru2]

Well, this is how societies actually advance. Generally, people aren't granted the stuff Twilight wanted to give them from a benign god. Generally, they have to seize the desiderata she wanted to give them from the clutches of a monster. As Bruce Cockburn said, you've got to kick at the darkness 'till it bleeds daylight.

[jack spartson]

Yes! Even though i am excited i suggest completeing aftermath of a fallen star first

[Loki777]

Ohhh, this is getting good.

It's crap what Blueblood and his conspirators did to Twilight is what leads to more crap; WWI ring a bell? The Archduke's assassination that kicked off WWI?

Also, could I borrow a few of your OCs in the near future or no?

[Rated Ponystar]

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Which ones?

[Loki777]

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Gallant Heart, his brother, and Lord Hex (The third OC that I want to borrow in the near or sometime in the future down the road if you don't mind me portraying him as Blueblood's uncle).

I did make a father for Blueblood, but called him Judas Blueblood instead of Amadeus Blueblood (Judas of the Bible ring a bell?).

And I plan to have Blueblood be less of a jerk and more of one with a heart of gold that gets roped into the mess of the fanfiction arc I'm working on called Equestria Chronicles: Age of Alliances.

Also, if you were to give alternate forms for Twilight and Flash, what would you give them?

Link to journal: http://fujin777.deviantart.com/journal/Car-mode-ideas-for-Fanfiction-Arc-486735753

[Rated Ponystar]

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Lord Hex I can give you, but not the brothers. Sorry

[Loki777]

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Okay then, I'll make the adjustments accordingly which includes changing the KSI Decepticon Commando aka Gallant Heart to Valor Wind a Royal Guard that was personally trained by my OC Arthur R Hanson.

[FluffIeLord]

So this is coming to its end? I really liked every chapter. I hope the sequel doesn't change the narrative style
I love the POV narration

[Rated Ponystar]

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No it's not coming to an end.