Road Block · 10:36pm Jan 27th, 2015
Yep. I've officially hit another goddamn wall, so far I've tried my original ideas on how to get passed it but nothing is coming to mind. However, I have been working on The Butler again. So those of you who follow that story keep your eyes and ears open.
Also these songs won't leave my head.
Hell March 3 sucked ass, Hell March 2 is far better
2751399 They sound exactly the same in my opinion.
2751440 they are similar but there is a difference and that difference makes the HM2 better than HM3, like RA2 was still a better game than RA3, EA screwed up C&C.
Do you know where you want the story to go and it's just one step of the way you're stuck on, or are you having trouble deciding where the story should go?
2751463 I have a large portion of the story laid out, however, a piece I am at is stopping me from getting to where I need to go. A rather important scene too, and I'm having trouble trying to avoid messing it up or making it seem right. Everything I write down and re-read just doesn't seem like it makes a lick of sense.
2751656 If you want some help shoot me a PM and ill give you some advice.
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Is it a matter of not being sure how the scene should progress, or does everyone end up sounding out of character?
I can take a look at a draft/outline if you'd like, though I must admit that I have trouble telling most of your human characters apart.
2751857 I don't have the scene outlined entirely (I was referring the story as a whole), though I can probably work one up for you.
2751746 When I get the time I'll shoot you one, as of now I have homework to finish up.
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Even a vague description of what's supposed to happen would help. I don't mind the chapter/scene being spoiled in a pm if you'd like.
2751656 If the problem lies with one scene coming out forced, then just go back to the beginning of that scene. You know the pieces and how they like to move, just let them tell the story.