Ramblings #1 · 4:38am Jan 11th, 2015
I had a story before OC Battle and to say the least . . . It was pretty bad. it was called the Drawbacks and Advntages of Combination. I started it the day after Halloween and I had this idea that was rolling around in my head for a few months. I thought "Bro, what would happen if like Pnkiepie and Twilight were combined into one pony," I started writing it and despite it's really freekin' cool name it was bad in many different ways. The prologue was the one that I feel the most proud of. It was one of the only chapters that wasn't completely disjointed with the rest of the story. It was actually the only one that seemed pretty good and I wasted the potential it had. It framed the story well and it did a good job.
The rest of the sory is pretty abysmal but, to sum it up it had problems with pacing, grammar, and it had complete unawareness of what it was leading up to.
