my first story

This blog will be more collected and less hyper :3
I had one story that with even editing wouldn't work :/ so I deleted it after it was declined. I decided to read more stories to learn! So, a few months later I tried again. It was this story but with a different story like XD it was declined. I read further and cane across Calm Wind's stories. Man, those are good! I learned a lot from just reading them. But also from reading with an observing eye, how do they do the lalay out? The talking? The description? And so I learned!
And again, please check out my story :3