German And American updates! (And sneak peek) · 6:57am Jan 5th, 2015
Hey guys!
I'm glad to announce chapter 22 and 23 are done! I'm waiting only for them to finish editing and then I'll post them. Meanwhile, here's a sneak peek of chapter... Well, one of the two
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Princess Celestia looked please as she saw the two humans shake hands. It was obvious they had left all their enmity behind now. It was better that way since they appeared (and had proven her right) much better qualified to lead the troops than any of his other generals.
She finally stopped her magic as the two stopped shaking hands and a mirror she had been using stopped showing the image. She had used a very old and forgotten spell only she and her sister remembered that allowed her to see all around a building. She had not allowed anypony to know about it because many would feel uncomfortable that she could see anything within the castle. She didn't used it much though; mostly to spy on her nephew to make sure he wasn't doing anything wrong.
"I see you were using the spy spell, sister," came Luna's voice from behind. Celestia turned.
"Yes. I'm glad to see that Davis and Louis have mended whatever problem they had now for good."
Luna smiled. "Well, I believe that is going to help." She stopped smiling. "We managed to distract the case of SolverInk, but soon the noble's will be angry not only that we supported general Davis, but also that we made the general they appointed a lower rank." She appeared troubled. "They are not going to stop until we restore him his position."
"And we take Louis and Davis off of theirs," Celedtia added.
Luna nodded. "Yes, the noble's of today are indeed a bunch of disrespectful ponies that think too highly of themselves. I rbered we used to have full control before."
Celestia sighed. "Yes, but in the end the deductions to give them more power stopped their wishes for rebellion three hundred years ago."
Luna nodded. "I don't think it should be that way." The princess of the Sun sighed.
"What do you propose then? We take their power away? Say we have full control now and they are simple advisors and land-owners?" Celestia seemed slightly angry.
"Calm down Tia, I was merely suggesting." She looked away. "It's just that I find this way of their council a little too problematic for matters of state. We can't do anything now without them approving."
"Nothing on the lands they have under their charge, you mean?" Celestia said confused.
"Nothing that is good for equestria but not for them!" she growled suddenly. Celestia looked surprised and shocked as Luna suddenly opened her eyes in surprise. "I-I'm sorry... I didn't mean to snap at you like that..."
Celestia seemed to recover from the shock as she went and smiled at her sister. "Don't worry Luna. It's fine." She nuzzled her kindly. "I do understand your concerns, and I'm troubled by that as well; let me see what I can do, but remember that we can't do anything harsh."
Luna nodded. "Yes Tia."
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