An explaination · 2:02am Dec 23rd, 2014
Ok, Ok I can take a hint guys, everyone is more confused than ever. So during this blog post I will explain what is going on, ok?"
First off why I think everyone is so lost here is my complete lack of explaining what certain characters are doing in this story and are they really needed? Well its like this. Yes and No. Rumble and his brother are needed, Button Mash, Sweetie Belle, Diamond Tiara and many others was not. Before the girls left town I reveled that Apple Bloom was pregnant and a couple of chapters later I reveled that Rumble is the father and also that Thunderlane and Rarity dated at some point.
Which brings us to point number one. I think I forgot to show that Sweet Apple Acres was not doing so well finically and a new member to the family is going to cause some problems later, Applejack knows this which is why she went out that night. Just to let go of the burden of financial responsibility and just have fun with her friends.
Second, Thunderlane, Rarity and Rainbow Dash. You know that Thunderlane and Rarity dated for a time and was on Rainbow's weather team seven. Ok now somewhere down the line something happened and it all came crashing down that caused Thunderlane and his brother to move to Manehatten, which is why part two is called Manehatten Blues. The lightheartedness was put on the side for now for not so lighthearted moments. There has to be some bad to balance out the good, just like life. Rumble and Apple Bloom was something else. Don't you find it weird that neither of them got a letter in almost a year despite Rumble saying that he did mail letters to Apple Bloom? That will be explained in THIS story, why? Because it the SAME reason that Twilight married Trixie
Which brings up point number two. Yes I know that this is a Twixie story but its not the main focus here but the end goal of Twilight's quest.
Third, Yes I am aware that I completely screwed up A LOT of things here and there. And I know that the story seems like a mess, and sometimes I joke about this in the story, but it will untangle soon. The reason I did this was for people to come up with some answers for what was happening and think about some things. Because if I didn't this story would have been a One-shot, but I thought that was waaayyy overdone.
But I refuse to just give up on this story. And I will finish what I started, and hopefully this cleared up some confusion and I plan to do that in the story. For real this time.
I don't think an explanation was needed, at least to me.
Yeah, I was (I'm still) confused, but in a good way. I think this is the kind of stories that are meant to confuse the reader. Of course, you could have made it better, the fact that Sweet Apple Acres was not doing well financially never crossed my mind.
2671879 Yeah that was my bad. I could have sworn I put that Sweet Apple Acres was not doing so hot but I guess not. And yes I do like confusing the reader to keep things interesting and fresh. But that's only some of the time though.