Only a week delay...Chapter 3 content inside · 11:23pm Jun 23rd, 2012
As you've notice, chapter 3 is up.
Despite the week delayed by Lemons racing the long awaited chapter is up. There is a slight deviation as many of you will see in that its broken into two parts. First part is following Max and what he's doing. The second half we follow Luna and her guards. Why is that? Because when you need some back story you need to venture outside a bit. And several hints as to future chapters are also mentioned here. And my brilliant idea that I may or may not eventually get to was stated in the second half of this chapter.
If you're wondering, it's the guards looking out for the Mane 6's duties back at home while they're away in Canterlot. It's always something I wondered about in the show and it has the basis for being a rather funny story...it'll be quite difficult to figure out how many guards I'd need, and how many names I'd have to think up. So given the week delay I do hope you enjoy this chapter.
And while I was especially hard on my own proof-reading of this chapter, it still isn't enough. I kinda need some proof readers, I know I asked before and had a few volunteers but I haven't heard back from them. I understand there's this world called life and things we can't control...but I think we can all agree I'm not perfect, there's a few miss-steps in the grammar, comma, and weird sentence department and I need a fresh set of eyes to point these out to me.
I'd rather not have to head to Ponychan, but if I have to I have to.
Sorry bro. On top of computer problems, I've been busy. =(
193498
Whew, had me worried there.
No worries. At least I can stop panicking now
Perhaps I could help you proofread if need be?
194934
I'm ok with that. Perhaps with you and horror I can rotate you two...ie one reviews one chapter and the other reviews the next. Just send me a message if you're still up for it
196525
I'm up for it.
196898
Sweet. Now I need a private message so we can finalize things.