TWither
MLP: FiM
Dark
Sad
Tragedy
Queen Chrysalis, last of the changelings, monitors the hive and her children, as she has done many times before. However, something is bothering her.
Chrysalis
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29 weeks
Star of the Show 'rewrite'

The first chapter of this story was what bothered me the most, so I think subsequent rewrites will be less entire chapter overhauls and more akin to editing pieces of the chapter that I don't vibe with. With the exception maybe of the chapter where Nemesis storms Ellura HQ in Manehattan, that one may get some significant rewrites. I can't tell when that'll happen of course, I'm on vacation
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55 weeks
First chapter rewrite

The first chapter of this story has been freshly rewritten from scratch. The cancelled tag remains for now.
This does not promise that the story is coming back, all I know is that the first chapter was bothering me and I hated how it was written, so I revised it.
The main thing you need to know is that watchful wings = ellura.
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200 weeks
Just so we're absolutely clear on my stance of recent things

Hate is not free speech. If you advocate to give hate a platform on which to speak, you are advocating the spreading of its message. It's not censorship, it's called being a decent fucking human being.
I do not stand for racist or fascist groups, I have zero tolerance for such waste, and if you keep defending its inclusion under the rights of 'free speech', then you are part of the problem.
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250 weeks
I'm making Super Mario Maker 2 Levels!

I used to make stuff back on SMM1, but it was pretty beginner level stuff and I had no idea what I was doing.
and the same truth holds here! Kinda. I'm trying to improve.
I'd still definitely consider myself a beginner, so if any of you guys happen to have SMM2 and would like to give me some advice, it'd be appreciated.
I only have two levels so far:
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250 weeks
Just got around to watching 'Between dusk and dawn'

Literally the very first scene, Loon and Celly fight a giant mountain turtle
Literally my reaction as I watched:
"Oh, giant mountain turtle? I wrote about that before, though celly and loon were fighting it, not the mane si-"
Celly and Loon show up
"HOLD UP A SECOND WHAT THE FU-"
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Nov

23rd

2014

THE EDITS ARE REALZIES · 10:16pm Nov 23rd, 2014

I can strike a 'to-do' off of my to-do list, Wither has been EDITED.

Editing notes:

-Chrysalis' descent into madness is now much more showy. No longer does she look upon dead changelings and see dead changelings, but happy subjects.

-The 'other Chrysalis' has now simply been named 'The Other'. Her personality is much more akin to the Chrysalis from the show, sarcasm dripping off her unkind words and her rants now have a bit of seductive animation.

-A hive mind mentality has been implemented. In the scene with the war room generals, Chrysalis 'speaks' with them through telepathy, rather than out loud.

Hope you guys enjoy. c:

More edits may come depending on what the EqD/TRG guys tell me.

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