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Your Antagonist


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  • 332 weeks
    Formal Retirement From Fimfic

    What's there to say? I've had a good ole' run on this site, but I think it's time I finally close the book on my MLP fanfic career. I've made lots of progress as a writer, made some good friends and had a blast doing it, but as of late, I just don't feel compelled to type away at stories about pastel-colored horses like I used to. I've tried, but the spark just won't ignite like it used to. But

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    15 comments · 978 views
  • 360 weeks
    Haven't done that in a while.

    Still feels all jittery and fluttery when you press the submit button. Oh, and I'm not dead yet so... yeah.

    Loathe,
    Your Antagonist

    4 comments · 319 views
  • 408 weeks
    Soo... Anyone else here at Bronyccon?

    Been here for a few hours and I've pretty much been confined to the game room, but I'd love to meet and hang out my fellow fimfic users... If any of y'all are present of course. That said, anyone here?

    7 comments · 559 views
  • 421 weeks
    Cancelled yet INcomplete Stories #1 Having Your Cake And Eating Her Out Too (secret scenario)

    Warning/ Disclaimer: The following chapter contains depictions of sexual acts between two female, cartoon horses, one of whom is below the age of consent in certain states and countries, but not all. If this offends you, never forget: this isn’t real and no one is making you read this, so just suck it up and make better decisions.

    Having Your Cake and Eating Her Out Too

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    5 comments · 487 views
  • 424 weeks
    Cancelled but complete stories#2: Everything's Wrong But At Least I've Got You Chapter 2

    The second chapter of that last blog story if anyone wanted a little more of that story (and I doubt anyone did).

    Everything’s Wrong, But At Least I’ve Got You

    Written By: Your Antagonist

    And That Night, She Dreamt Of That Day

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Nov
21st
2014

Friday Nights With Antagonist #1 (Fanfiction Readings) · 12:47pm Nov 21st, 2014

So evidently my brain decided--without my consent mind you-- that doing dramatic readings should be my new thing since I hardly put out horse words anyways. I was planning on doing 2 per weekend but only if y'all, my dear readers, like it. I picked a slightly under par clop-comedy as a first video to gauge y'all's reception to this here development.

Original story here
Lemme know if you want more readings and if so what I can change to make it better for you. Better camera, better microphone, more immersion into the story, less of my own commentary and reactions, a picture instead of my ugly mug, slower reading, better story selections, shittier story selections read seriously (because those can be fun too), etc. If you don't like it, just tell me and we'll never speak of this again, I'll just touch myself and cry myself to sleep.

Also is wrong for me to be so very proud of this particular comment I left on someone else's story?

Loathe,
Your Antagonist

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Comments ( 7 )

No, you should absolutely not feel bad about that comment. Over-exaggeration of accents is my top pet peeve. Hell, I was guilty of it, too. The Scottish character in my story read like a dyslexic epileptic in a stereotypical pub. I have since fixed it, but still...

I have to say that your comment was brilliant. I'd feel proud of it if I wrote it. Anyway, I'll check out your reading when I get the chance. :pinkiesmile:

I hope things are going well for you. :twilightsmile:

Yep, I love this already. If you are very able to buy a better microphone (or speak closer to your own), it would sound way better. The mic you have right now doesn't even begin to touch on your deep baritone voice.

I tend to be really picky when it comes to mics because everyone generally sounds better when they talk in a really good mic.

2609801 Better mic, noted. Thank you for your feedback. Probably the only person who listened.

2608692 I see. Thanks for the constructive criticism.

2609883 I listened. Only for the first few minutes. Then I skimmed. I didn't enjoy it.
Reading vids never really were my thing, but that particular story was just painful to listen to. Plus, I think you might want to check other, more viewed reading vids and see why they got so many views.

2609985 I don't want views, I want to entertain my readers and also find a more constructive means of occupying the time I don't spend writing. Trust me, the last thing I want is to be identified by anyone outside of my fimfic audience. Also that's still not good constructive criticism but I'll take the bit about story quality. Read better stories, got it.

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