A new Journey

Well this embarrassing though I do realize it might come to this. I need a beta and or a Pre-reader anybody whose better than me when it comes to spelling and grammar! What makes this more embarrassing is that american english is my first language and I know above else I'm horrible at it! So please if someone is willing to help throw me a bone, the work load will most likely be light only increasing if you want to help me with my nonpony works.