Anyone owning a hardcopy might notice a change in the chapter title. It was a smidge of inspiration that hit me last week when posting the chapter before, and I couldn't get it unstuck from my head. So here's your official claim to first-edition fame.
EDIT: I've been told the reason is not some crazy coding thing. It's because someone I shared it with put the chapters into a folder called "Ponyfic." So much for that exciting mystery.
I'm still looking for your original draft because I want to read the moment again where Scootaloo tries to commit suicide, which I think is missing in the published version. In general, your published version seems less dramatic, not that it wasn't bad but personally I prefered the original..
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"Ponyfic"
Google never ceases to amaze and disturb me...
Could this be the original draft?
Still looking for that..
There was one person who said he had it but he stopped replying a long time ago..
Can you or someone link this google code stuff here? I'm not so familiar with that site and entering "ponyfic" doesn't yield results.
I'm still looking for your original draft because I want to read the moment again where Scootaloo tries to commit suicide, which I think is missing in the published version. In general, your published version seems less dramatic, not that it wasn't bad but personally I prefered the original..