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Kaptein


  • TThe Stranger
    The Princesses puzzle over a strange mare with no memory and two large horns growing on her head. Meanwhile, a reclusive stallion haunted by his past realises that it has come to catch up with him.
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  • 293 weeks
    An update.... of sorts

    So... yeah.

    It's been a long time since I last updated any of my stories, and you deserve at least some sort of communication regarding that.

    The truth is not really simple. A lot of things have happened to me since the beginning of this year. I've suffered a lot of real-life stresses, coupled with a break-up of a partner that took several months longer than it should have.

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    1 comments · 490 views
  • 360 weeks
    The next chapter of 'The Paragon Guard' is finished

    Hi all!

    So, I'm not actually dead. I've just been really demotivated in my writing.

    But, I've managed to finish the first draft of the next Paragon Guard chapter. This one does a little more world-building, and while starting off seriously it has a nice light-hearted ending

    I'll need some time to finish editing and proof-reading.

    Please bear with me! You'll get your Paragon fix soon!

    2 comments · 370 views
  • 391 weeks
    Next chapter of 'One Year Later' is finished.

    It's just going through some editing and proof-reading. I need to make sure that the grammar is correct, and that storyline-wise I haven't broken anything.

    Story isn't dead!

    I'll be working on a chapter for Paragon Guard next. It's long overdue for an update.

    0 comments · 465 views
  • 412 weeks
    One Year Later is (seriously) not dead! (Also, I need some extra editors and proof-readers : P)

    This chapter took far longer than I wanted it to, and I'm so sorry for that.

    I've finished the first draft of it, and it just needs some editting and proof-reading to make sure all my mistakes and errors are caught, lined up and shot for their crimes before the story is released to the wild.

    I promise, I'll make sure they are given a proper funeral, first.

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    1 comments · 409 views
  • 418 weeks
    One Year Later is not dead

    I all of you an apology, for the stupidly long amount of time it's taking for me to get the next chapter of One Year Later out.

    I'm probably about 40% finished with writing it, and it will be longer than most other chapters.

    In addition, I'm also writing another (admittedly very short) chapter for Dying Flame. It's actually a chapter I've wanted to write for it for a very long time.

    1 comments · 363 views
Sep
26th
2014

Should I make Bon-Bon a changeling? · 11:27am Sep 26th, 2014

As I'm busy writing The Stranger, I realise that there's a lot of things more I can do (for the story at least) if Bon-Bon were a changeling and not just a normal earth-pony. If you look at it in comparison to the show canon, a changeling would make sense (it's why she has a different voice each time).

My worry is that "Bon-Bon is a Changeling" might be overdone. I don't want to write something that's been done, and done better by others. Although this limits what I can do slightly, I'm determined to work around it one way or another.

So...what are your guys' thoughts on it? If Bon-Bon were suddenly a changeling, would that have any effect on your opinion of the story?

Please, leave your thoughts in the comments.

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Comments ( 1 )

Not really... but it is overdone. In my fics, I avoid the situation by saying a few THINK she's a changeling, when actually she used to be a ventriloquist like Jeff Dunham

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