New Story and Why You Can't See It.

So a little bit ago I was on a terrible story because I hate my eyes and I made a comment. A couple people told me to make this into a story. After a bit of thought, I did. I didn't submit it though, because reading over this it is way to meta to get passed, imho. For anyone who wants to read the story I made out of that comment, though, it is called The Parable of the Pony. The password to the story is "nuggets" (without the quotation marks).

I hope you guys enjoy it, and if not please tell me why you didn't! The story is about accepting criticism after all.

Comments

[New Lunar Principality]

I've read the whole thing and I say publish it I dont see any meta in this other than the author who wont change obviously being jussonic. And the message I completely agree with it, its a message me and other writers live by always seeking to improve from criticism and other such sources so I say submit you'll get an up vote and favorite from me

[DuskPhoenix]

2472992 You make a good point, though I meant for it to apply to anyone who holds that mentality, not just one user. I submitted it. It probably won't pass, but I'll edit this blog if it does. Thanks.

[New Lunar Principality]

2473969 no problem