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Illumenarie


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  • 502 weeks
    Requesting a little help. Please?

    So as you fellow ponies might have noticed, those who read my stories, I have the first two chapters(prologue and chapter one) of Henry Trotter and the Alicorn Amulet up and boy, is it STILL a mess. Despite going over it a few times before and AFTER posting, there are still errors I'm catching left and right like I was asleep when I wrote this or something. I'm kind of appalled at my own

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    1 comments · 326 views
  • 505 weeks
    The Henry Trotter Series

    "Henrietta “Henry” Trotter is an Animagi unicorn, a breed of pony that can perform magic while her best friend is a teenage girl who learns that she is part of the Homo Magica race, humans who also have magical abilities. Then one day while out running, Mallory finds an ancient amulet that changes both of their lives forever. Upon waking up, the two realize that they can communicate with each

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    1 comments · 358 views
  • 505 weeks
    Stars Rise & Fall: Revision

    So after much thinking and after getting negative feedback along with some tips, I have decided to revise the whole concept of "Stars Rise & Fall". While most of the general story will pretty much be the same, there will be some key features, probably major features, that have/will been changed. I've taken the original story down for now and will be uploading the re-visioned version hopefully

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    2 comments · 329 views
  • 506 weeks
    Interview with a vampire...pony? Yay or Nay

    So um yeah, getting right into this one here.

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    0 comments · 306 views
Sep
17th
2014

Requesting a little help. Please? · 3:06am Sep 17th, 2014

So as you fellow ponies might have noticed, those who read my stories, I have the first two chapters(prologue and chapter one) of Henry Trotter and the Alicorn Amulet up and boy, is it STILL a mess. Despite going over it a few times before and AFTER posting, there are still errors I'm catching left and right like I was asleep when I wrote this or something. I'm kind of appalled at my own bad grammar and typos and having ever thought to myself that it was ever good enough to post online in its current state but perhaps that is my perfectionism kicking in. Meh. That aside, I think it may be time I buck up and just ask for help. So if anyone is willing I'd be so very thankful, grateful, and appreciative for those interested in becoming editors and pre-readers, heck -- even just somepony to bounce ideas off and shoot me when I lose focus -- to speak up and PM me or something. And a huge thank you to my followers and those who have been gracious enough to keep coming back to read my stuff AND like it along with those who have offered advice and given tips as I know it's not *cough* good *cough*. Thanks and happy reading!

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I could help you if you still need it.

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